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Title: The Arm
Post by: beejazz on March 05, 2014, 09:51:48 AM
I made a short comic called the arm. Figured I'd share it with you guys. And here it is. (http://beejazz.deviantart.com/art/The-Arm-438293586)
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Post by: Magnus Pym on March 05, 2014, 12:10:04 PM
lol
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Post by: Steerpike on March 05, 2014, 12:11:40 PM
Really weird!  Are you planning on doing more?
Title: Re: The Arm
Post by: beejazz on March 05, 2014, 01:28:59 PM
Initially it was meant as a stand-alone thing. I'm thinking of continuing it. And it's likely to get a little weirder before the end.
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Post by: Seraph on March 05, 2014, 03:38:08 PM
Weird is certainly the word for it. 
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Post by: Numinous on March 06, 2014, 06:32:38 AM
I really enjoyed this, very cool.
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Post by: Weave on March 06, 2014, 07:46:03 AM
Very strange, and I really like the art. Kind of reminds me of Rice Boy (http://www.rice-boy.com/).
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Post by: LordVreeg on March 06, 2014, 09:51:38 AM
It worked for me.  Very much, actually.
Title: Re: The Arm
Post by: beejazz on March 06, 2014, 12:06:07 PM
Glad you all liked it.

Quote from: WeaveKind of reminds me of Rice Boy
I'm a huge fan of pretty much all of Dahm's work, so thanks.
Title: Re: The Arm
Post by: SA on March 07, 2014, 09:26:41 PM
Beautiful. Just...

*sobs*
Title: Re: The Arm
Post by: beejazz on March 10, 2014, 12:16:55 PM
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Beautiful. Just...

*sobs*
Glad you like it. In the next day or two I'll have a sort of "cover" image to go with it. Warlock will be standing in the bowl of the spoon, flying way up in the air with the landscape around and beneath him. Soldier will be dangling off the back by his only arm.
Title: Re: The Arm
Post by: beejazz on March 13, 2014, 05:17:55 PM
And here's (http://beejazz.deviantart.com/art/The-Arm-A-Second-Opinion-Cover-440137638) that "cover" bit for the next part of the story.
Title: Re: The Arm
Post by: SA on March 13, 2014, 09:50:16 PM
You have a bright and peculiar future ahead of you.
Title: Re: The Arm
Post by: beejazz on March 18, 2014, 10:37:36 PM
Thanks. I certainly hope so. I just graduated, so stuff's sort of up in the air right now. I'll post more as I have it.
Title: Re: The Arm
Post by: LD on March 18, 2014, 11:32:00 PM
A decidedly ineffectual...well, he had an effect... so incompetent... wizard... or was it that the insults were not good enough.

The cover is very nice.
Title: Re: The Arm
Post by: beejazz on March 19, 2014, 10:27:55 PM
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A decidedly ineffectual...well, he had an effect... so incompetent... wizard... or was it that the insults were not good enough.

The cover is very nice.
Thanks.

Without spoiling too much, there are outside factors messing with the spell. The next few sections will get into the details. Guy's still a bit out there though.
Title: Re: The Arm
Post by: beejazz on March 26, 2014, 07:54:44 PM
Blocking out the new story. Pretty slow going since I've been moving out of my apartment lately. It'll likely be much longer than the last one.
http://beejazz.deviantart.com/art/TheArmPage2WIP2-443022579
Title: Re: The Arm
Post by: SA on March 26, 2014, 08:17:11 PM
Oh no! Can't read.

SPOILERSSSSS.
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Post by: beejazz on March 27, 2014, 02:41:32 PM
Maybe I'll post future WIPs textless. Sort of just wanted to show off what bit of progress I've been able to make.
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Post by: Nomadic on March 28, 2014, 01:06:03 AM
Man I'm upset that I was so busy and didn't notice this earlier. That was twisted and yet absolutely hilarious. Very much the kind of screwed up humor I can get behind.
Title: Re: The Arm
Post by: beejazz on March 29, 2014, 09:54:24 AM
Thanks. There's lots more on the way.
Title: Re: The Arm
Post by: beejazz on May 23, 2014, 12:16:18 AM
Page 2 is all inked up at least. This one is textless, so moderately less spoilery. I'll try and do colors and text next week.

http://beejazz.deviantart.com/art/The-Arm-Inking-Progress-455728783
Title: Re: The Arm
Post by: SA on May 27, 2014, 06:08:36 PM
Goddamn this is intense.

If you published it in hardcover, I'd buy it. No lie.
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Post by: SA on May 27, 2014, 06:12:33 PM
ALSO: "it is a sacred disciprine that is Ninja Kitty"... goddamned hilarious.
Title: Re: The Arm
Post by: beejazz on May 28, 2014, 10:45:43 AM
Quote from: SA
Goddamn this is intense.

If you published it in hardcover, I'd buy it. No lie.
Thanks! Some form of publishing might be down the road. Right now all I've got to offer is commissions. (http://beejazz.deviantart.com/journal/Commissions-Open-455271263)
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ALSO: "it is a sacred disciprine that is Ninja Kitty"... goddamned hilarious.
Yeah, those comics were fun to make. Exquisite corpse games work surprisingly well for comics. That day I was working with two guys from Lobsterdance. (http://vimeo.com/lobsterdance) They do some fun kaiju movies and stuff.
Title: Re: The Arm
Post by: beejazz on July 07, 2014, 09:07:57 PM
So page 2 is done. Lines on page 3 next on the agenda.

http://beejazz.deviantart.com/art/TheArmPage2-466395200
Title: Re: The Arm
Post by: SA on July 13, 2014, 01:35:13 AM
*NOM NOM*

these are so good
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Post by: beejazz on July 16, 2014, 10:51:11 PM
Quote from: SA
*NOM NOM*

these are so good
Thanks man.

Page 3 lines: http://beejazz.deviantart.com/art/The-Arm-Page-3-Lines-468591245
Title: Re: The Arm
Post by: beejazz on July 25, 2014, 02:50:41 PM
And now page 3 proper: http://beejazz.deviantart.com/art/The-Arm-Page-3-470541325
Title: Re: The Arm
Post by: LD on July 25, 2014, 10:25:01 PM
Is your wizard to blame for this as well? (http://wgno.com/2014/07/25/teen-had-more-than-230-teeth-removed-from-his-mouth/)
Title: Re: The Arm
Post by: beejazz on July 27, 2014, 09:02:03 AM
Quote from: Light Dragon
Is your wizard to blame for this as well? (http://wgno.com/2014/07/25/teen-had-more-than-230-teeth-removed-from-his-mouth/)
Oh wow. That is wild.
Title: Re: The Arm
Post by: beejazz on August 26, 2014, 01:02:59 PM
Got some more lines up. This page had a few really fun panels.

http://beejazz.deviantart.com/art/The-Arm-Page-4-Lines-478135366
Title: Re: The Arm
Post by: beejazz on October 02, 2014, 06:29:15 PM
Finally finished page 4.

http://beejazz.deviantart.com/art/The-Arm-Page-4-485991785
Title: Re: The Arm
Post by: beejazz on October 14, 2014, 07:50:16 AM
So I got a comicfury site and I'm working on learning how to tweak that a little.
http://thearm.webcomic.ws/

Additionally I'd really appreciate it if you guys could help me vote for it on TWC.
http://topwebcomics.com/sample/18717/default.aspx
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