A PDF containing a story set in my new setting. It's supposed to be the "backstory" of a particular character, but I felt it would be nice to introduce part of my setting this way.
I'm not the happiest with the way it turned out. I decided to keep it short (8 pages), but include some important concepts, if in brief. I don't think it presents any "culture" issues well enough, but maybe the story isn't right for that anyways.
Anyways, if you get a chance, please read and give me some feedback. I'd like to because a decent writer someday.
http://files.filefront.com/The+Thanepdf/;12870855;/fileinfo.html
M.
Promising. It needs a bit of polish, but otherwise interesting.
One thing, though: "recant" is not used properly. I believe you mean "recount".
I'll give it a look. I think some of my sentences are a bit awkward, which I will also need to fix.
M.
Fifty seven views and only one response?
:/
M.