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Title: In the Line of Battle
Post by: Cheomesh on January 19, 2009, 02:08:59 AM

Same setting, different person, etc.

I realize my last one was pretty boring, so I tried to make this one shorter and more engaging. It's written in the form of a letter to the characters cousin, recounting a battle against Troglodytes.

http://files.filefront.com/In+the+Line+of+Battlepdf/;13022179;/fileinfo.html

M.

Title: In the Line of Battle
Post by: Drizztrocks on January 20, 2009, 09:07:32 PM

Very cool. You are very good at writing first person battle scenes, as I for one lack in that.

Title: In the Line of Battle
Post by: LordVreeg on January 24, 2009, 09:00:20 PM

Quite enjoyable. Very down-to-earth, and realistic. Glen Cook, look out.

Title: In the Line of Battle
Post by: Cheomesh on January 27, 2009, 03:08:10 AM

Thanks, I thought the letter approach would serve me well.

M.

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