The Campaign Builder's Guild

How's this for thread necromancy?

I've been beavering away at the world for some years now, creating a LOT of maps, history and lore, with an eye towards printing two books (mostly for my own amusement, though some internet-dwelling people have shown an interest in them): an Encyclopaedia and an Atlas.  

Some things to know about Elyden

• 1) Decay: Elyden is a dying world. The seas are slowly retreating, Ice in the north and south poles Is growing every year and the sun is slowly goring weaker. Empires built atop the ruin of older empires are crumbling to decadence and greed. Resources are waning. Life is cheap (to the common folk, at least).
• 2) Ancient: We are now in the Fifth Age, which is around 5,000 years old. Most Fourth Age and early fifth Age nations are ruined and unknown to unlearned people, their ruins either forgotten and consumed by the elements or serving as the foundations for today's cities. The Third Age is considered near-mythical and is the basis for many folk tales and legends, with fantastical races and beasts that are now extinct.
• 3) Demiurges: Elyden (and the universe that supports it) was created by 22 Demiurges (gods) whose hubris led to their fall and banishment to the mortal realm, where they each became leader (some willing, others unwilling) to a mortal tribe (of which humans are one). Most demiurges are now 'dead' (death to a demiurge is similar to a coma, their dreams and nightmares manifesting in the land surrounding them). The Demiurges sired scions, the descendants of which still possess traits and powers from their demiurge sire. Few scion-born know of their divine heritage and what powers or traits they have are so diluted as to not be of import.
     The Demiurges are largely forgotten, remembered or worshipped as corrupted versions without most known the truth (save one, who has cunningly adopted the human race as his own and become the Undying Machine – god of the nation of Korachan, interred in a life-support machine deep in the Karkharadontid desert – a site of pilgrimage to his faithful). More on the Demiurges can be found here.
• 4) the Materia Omna: the chaotic matter from which the Demiurges shaped the universe. Their stirring caused this chaotic sea to divide into two – the Firmament above and the Atramenta below. These are collectively known as the Materia Omna and are the fuel that power acts of shaping (magic). The two opposing energies manifest on Elyden through two antipodeal fonts – the Black Fountain and the Meniscus, for the Atramenta and the Firmament, respectively. More on this here.
     The Firmament and Atramenta also leak into the material realm, resulting in tainted regions that are quantified in varying degrees, from mild to those that are so inimical to life, warping the natural laws of the world in strange ways, as to be shunned by mortals.
• 5) Dreams: dreams are tangible forces thanks to the actions of the Demiurges. They can be planted, read, examined and altered by Oneiromancers. They can also be travelled to and explored, though dreamrealms are dangerous and mutable, subject to the dreams and nightmares of the Demiurges. They can exist in one of two forms – either as physical tangible places that can be mapped and explored (insofar as a mutable dreamland can) through mundane means; or they can be otherworldly realms that can only be reached through astral projection or Oneiromancy.  
• 6) the otherworld and otherworlders: death is not final in Elyden. Following death a persons soul enters a gestative period of arbitrary length, with the spirit dwelling in a timeless astral plane known as the otherworld. This realm can be travelled to by some shapers, and is used for long-range communication. Amongst other things. Following this period the spirit is reborn as an otherworlder – an alien aloof being that returns to the material realm. Mortals claim these beings are considered as angels or demons, their purpose unknown, but thought to either aid or hinder mortals. The truth is unknown and though the varying breeds have been catalogued under strange taxonomies, they remain oddities of the otherworld, rare, despite it being accepted as fact that each spirit eventually becomes an otherworlder.
• 7) Halfbloods: Some otherworlders can breed with mortals, leading to so-called halfbloods – beings with one foot in the material and another in the otherworld, belonging to neither. They appear alien and have strange wondrous abilities, that dilute with each generation. Some halfbloods have risen to positions of power, either ruling, or founding great hoses and dynasties that last millennia, inbreeding and seeking out otherworlders of their lineage to preserve their bloodline  
• 8) Technology and Technarcana: The heart of Elyden is the Inner Sea, and the nations surrounding it are post-industrial. Aside from steam engines and other technologies common in the real world around the Victorian era, there is also technarcana – machines and engines that use the Atramenta and the Firmament to function. These can take the form of scrying pool, far-range communicators, body orthoses akin to power armour, iron-mantles surgically grafted to shapers backs to aid them in their shaping, and so on.
     With regards to real-world technologies, the main anachronism is the absence of trains (though there are electric trams in the larger cities). In their place are ambulants and conveyors – tracked vehicles that range from personal carriers and huge land-ships that crawl across the wastelands of the world. The printing press, steam mills, forges, photography, bicycles, single tracked motorbikes, primitive telegraphs metal-hulled steamships, rubber tyres, sewing machines, stainless steel, concrete, typewriters, repeating rifles and revolvers (but no machine guns), artillery, blimps (rare), electricity (relatively rare, only common in high-class districts of larger cities), phonograph & voice recordings.
     Notable absences include railways, radio, though technarcane replacements may exist, but not widespread.
• 9) YEAR 4007 RM: the present day is 4007 RM (the Reign of Malichar)

I'll be adding more details over the coming days.

I've also made some maps, including the examples below:

I'm not keen on the bellcurve results that the 3d6 give.

Well it's all hypothetical for the moment anyway as I have little plans to currently game in the world for now. The worldbuilding itself takes far too much time!

Quote from: Eilathen
A big problem were the tons of feats and the classes, so if you got rid of those, that's a big step. I wouldn't call it a d20 game anymore like that ;)

As I said I'm basing it on the modern system so there's 1 class per stat (strong character, dextrous character etc), though im actually thinking about scrapping classes altogether using a points-by system instead of levelling up. so yo ucan buy +1 Base attack for x points, +1 skill for x points,etc. Still speculative at the moment. though the sourcebook I'm writing at the moment is assuming a basis in the modern D20 system + more skills + skill/feat-based magic, scrapping the normal D20 spells entirely.

Quote from: EilathenThe other big thing was the linear distribution you get with a 1dX die-system. It's just too swingy and "unnatural"...it does not model processes well.

I guess if you have dumped classes, you also will have to work the skills differently, yes? That's another thing that bugged me with dnd 3e and 3.5... fighters were just bad at skills (the only thing they were good at was...well...fighting) and others, like thieves, were "the king" of skills...just wasn't my kind of thing. Also, miniatures-focused combat...ugh (that was even worse in 4e).

I agree about skills and certain classes ((my normal D&D group generally allows charcters to swap certain skills if they fit in with their classes and even the purest fighter in my group will commonly have a level of rogue for the skills too) and the modern classes address this and generally all classes have more skills to choose from, though as I'm also making region a big part of the system (you chose your region before your class during character creation) and that gives a lot of skills as class skills that would otherwise be unavailable to your class.

Well, the only things that will remain the same are ability scored and rolling d20s for a rooms. Classes, levels, magic, skills & feats will be quite different.

And reason you don't like the 3.5 rules?

Quote from: HippopotamusDundee
I am 110% in favour of and intrigued by this - I'm a huge fan of skill-based d20 variants, and also of magic systems modeled with the use of skills rather than points or Vancian spell slots.

As I said I love Jack Vance's work, but I LOATHE! Vancian magic, as it just makes no sense. I do get the elements of 'balance' that were likely at play in the first D&D rule that were so lovingly based on his magic system, I would rather have more 'realism' (if the term can be applied to magic) in the place balance. Having said that failing to cast spells can result in nonlethal damage, fatigue, exhaustion and other things, to help balance it for non-magic users.

Quote from: HippopotamusDundee
Given the number of demiurges in the setting  (the tarot-inspired gods are, by the by, still probably my favourite thing about this work) I'm imagining quite a diversity of mystery and apocalyptic cults, which I'm very interested to read about. Also when you talk about apocalypse cults are you meaning more the usual 'fire-and-brimstone' sort, or groups that celebrate the revelations and change that will come with the end, or both?

There are many entropic cults that act to bring about a speedier decay though whether its because they actively want the world to end or if they think something big will happen if the decay is sped up is anyones guess ;)
To be honest I haven't written much on these cults, though it's a very interesting question and something I'm keen to explore more. So that's going in my notebook!

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Loving the various mortal races - the reskinned classics are just as cool as the more original creations.

The world is very human-centric, with possibly 95% of the worlds population made up of humans (and much of the remaining 5% non-humans living in distant demesnes.  Having said that, there are many halfbloods (half mortal half 'otherworlder [otherworlders are the angels/demons of this world though its not as b/w as that), which can be quite alien-looking, depending on their generation.

added a quick info bar to the first post:

Quote from: Quick InfoTitle:  the Dying World of Elyden
System: originally the world started out as a worldbuilding project for my fiction, though I've started cobbling together some rules based on the D&D 3.5 OGL, though with a focus on skills, no levels, and a completely redesigned spell system (that's also skill based)   
Theme: a world that's decaying following the death of its gods (whose regenerative influence is now gone, leading to corruption and natural laws unravelling) 
Tone: gritty, decaying empires, corruption, jet black humour.
Inspirations:  Jack Vance's Dying World (Elyden's decay isn't quite as far along as Vane's Dying Earth, though it's getting there), H. P. Lovecraft's Cthulhu Mythos (regarding the dead, and largely unknown and misunderstood gods [Demiurges]), George R. R. Martin's A Song of Fire and Ice series (mainly the politics, this is more or an inspiration than something I'm planning on emulating), body horror, vague steampunk themes (no cogs!).
Technology: at it's highest tech is early industrial revolution: so the main nations have printing presses, steam engines (though not trains), steam ships with steel hulls, heliographs (cameras). Of course, that doesn't mean that everywhere has the same technological base. Much like in the present day there are many indigenous cultures living largely pre-industrialised lives (and using classical architecture), Elyden is much the same. Many cultures exist in a pre-industrial state (either having lost their tech or never developed it in the first place). Many technologies date back to a golden age that has long-since been forgotten, and few are those who understand them.     
Magic:  in pre-industrialised societies magic exists in two forms – either the Atramenta or the firmament – which are analogous with generic magic, though the industrialised nations look down on such primitive mysticism, as they have advanced to a scientific understanding of the world, using magic as a resource – so in these advanced cultures magicians (called shapers) are generally equivalent to modern ay mechanics, engineers and machinists, overseeing the magical engines. Elsewhere, clone-bred magically-attuned individuals are bred for specific roles though they are considered tools at best even though they are technically sentient. 
Religion: worship of the demiurges waned millennia past, and that is why the demiurges are now dead. Mystery cults remain in regions, though they are growing more  popular as are apocalyptic cults. Generally, most religions ar corruptions of the original demiurge cults, though few know their own faith's roots.
Races:  humans dominate the world and common fantasy races (elves, goblins, dwarves etc.) are not to be found. Other races exist in their place, largely the 22 mortal races (one for each demiurge) of which humans are one and the most successful. Most are either extinct or corrupted from their own original forms.
Ecology: nature is waning, and many creatures are now extinct. What remains is either corrupted by the twisted nature of the world or bred into specific roles. Corruption and genetic defects are common, both in the wild and in urban societies. Conjoined twins, cyclocephaly, hydrocephaly, polydactylism, arachnodactylism, ostepetrosis, etc. are all very common.
Geography: the world is dominated by a supercontinent that is divided into three, all separated by shallow inner seas. Farther afield is the sole island continent of Bror, a distant land.

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I look forward to hearing more about the present-day cultures, nations, ethnicities, etc.

thanks! that's something 'm working on at them  moment - trying to gather my notes into something more presentable.

In the meantime here's something about the 22 mortal tribes, as they were created in the First Age:

the Mortal Races
I thought I'd quickly touch upon something that I haven't mentioned much before: the mortal races. Despite the fact that humans form the vast majority of most mortal races in Elyden, that was not always the case. The reasons for this human proliferation are varied. Firstly, Most works of fantasy fiction, for one reason or another, have humans as the protagonist race. I presume it's just laziness or ease of worldbuilding – creating cultures and histories for invented nations is difficult-enough as it is: making them for alien races is something else entirely. It's just easier, as a human (yes, I'm human), to write something from the POV of a human than another race. That's not to say, however, that I won't do it at some point. Indeed, the protagonist of what I'm currently writing is not strictly human, so I've already ventured into that territory.
Having said that I love the variety that different race bring to the world and Elyden has varied sources from which I can create such creatures: the Two-and Twenty mortal races (the asicthai), the Otherworlders (Isawhan) and Halfbloods (Anthropeidos). Scions (the offspring of the demiurges and other creatures, normally asicthai) do not fit into any of the other classifications and exist as a fourth, unofficial one. I'll talk about each race, in brief, mentioning the mortal races in this post.

Illidræn: [spoiler]one of the Two-and-Twenty tribes, and children of the Demiurge Allaishada. Often winged, normally of alabaster skin & dark hair and serene dispositions, they are equated with angels by other races (particularly humans who have a tendency of deifying them, often without true cause), though they are far from perfect moral creatures. In truth, they are beings of compassion so pronounced that they must resort to asceticism and meditation to control their emotions. Due to their natures they tend to devote their lives to single pursuits, which they perfect, becoming experts in their chosen fields.
The race was whittled to near-extinction during the Shadow War that led to the fading between the Fourth and Fifth-Ages, the remnants of the species dispersing and living out the end of their race's days as solitary eremites in forgotten temples and ruins. To many they are indeed extinct though scholars maintain that scattered individuals have survived, their natural longevity and asceticism a bulwark against death and decay.[/spoiler]

Serapi: [spoiler]one of the Two-and-Twenty tribes, and children of the Demiurge Ashterath, Name for lizard-folk and dragon-kin cursed by the Demiurge Talantehut to be servants to the sun and to crawl in the hot earth on their stomachs. Their tongue is closest of any living creature to that originally wrought by the Demiurges, before the cataclysm of the Bridge of Worlds. Little is known of their original form or culture, only that it was their apparent sadistic nature that earnt them the scorn of Talantehut, who changed their form and that of their descendants forevermore.
            They are relatively common in the sun-drenched parts of Elyden – such as the deserts south of Venthir and those dominating Kharkharadontis, though little remains of any culture save base primitive tribal structures. Some claim that in some regions vestiges of a more civilised form remain, though such claims are unsubstantiated.[/spoiler]

Ifirmian: [spoiler]one of the Two-and-Twenty tribes, and children of the Demiurge Duruthilhotep, and the first mortal race to ever shape the Firmament. They are now commonly known as the immortal guardians of the Meniscus, named after the eponymous continent. They are the most proficient Firmamentists and are thought to be the closest in design to the original immortal races, whose gestation was interrupted by the worldcrafting of the Demiurges, resulting in the birth of the imperfect mortal races.
                They are slender people, tall, of long tapering heads and are not want to communicate with others without dire need. They are rarely seen outside of the lands surrounding the Meniscus and are thought extinct by most insular people.[/spoiler]

Valthas: [spoiler]one of the Two-and-Twenty tribes, and children of the Demiurge Talantehut. They were once very similar to humans, though through the long slow neglect of their Demiurge mother became corrupted into something baser; grey things without passion or hope or love. They became achromatic; creatures alive but without life, much like their mother. Where Talantehut was chosen to be a force of balance amongst her siblings, the valthasi were allowed to wither and die, their mortality dripping away with every eon their mother ignored them until they became the rotten shells that they are today, dwelling in the dark places of the world where they can pass unnoticed, much like their incorruptable Demiurge parent.
                Many physical laws that affect the mortal races do not apply to the valthas, which exist in a form of fugue between worlds – neither dead nor truly alive.[/spoiler]

Dverg: [spoiler]one of the Two-and-Twenty tribes, and children of the Demiurge Synchthonith, though they maintain few open ties to their ancestry. A few ancient temples have been discovered by Imperial explorers, hewn from deep caverns, though all are eons old, abandoned. Mulls are also believed to be distantly related to the dverg, though having diverged long ago they are now considered different races.
Stunted, technologically aware mortals native to lands north of the Inner Sea, originally centred around the Rhaecha mountains, though rarely seen in the open. Their lands and clades were wiped out millennia past by human expansion in the Fourth and early Fifth-Ages, and now they remain largely as a caste within the Korachani empire, an essential part to its industries. The Steel Cataract was mostly built by dvergai hands. Very shy, rarely leaving their underground clades, those seen in the empire are usually slaves and technologists. Their pale skin and large black eyes are sensitive to light so when seen close to and above ground they are almost always covered in thick leather suits and tinted goggles; the accountrements of their trade. They show little affinity for the Firmament or the Penumbrism, though have a cultural understanding of the latter and its applications within technarcana, and their seemingly innate affinity for engineering is legendary.[/spoiler]

Lhaus: [spoiler]one of the Two-and-Twenty tribes, and children of the demiurge Yaldabaoth. In their father's obsession with seeking eternal life, the lhaus became acolytes of the art of klados and followed him down the path of eternal life. Over the eons and their obsession with klados, they became a changed race, their goal of prolonged life achieved yet not without cost. Like their father, those with the purpose and means created secondary bodies (known as iterants) in which they would transfer their spirits upon death to achieve prolonged life, or a vague semblance of it. Each such iteration of an individual would bring with it a body that was more grotesque and featureless than the last, until, after dozens of such iterants had perished, the original person would be lost beneath a hollow shell that was consumed by its obsession with life.
                By the early days of the third age the leaders and upper echelons of lhaus society were embroiled with seeking the mysteries of klados and lhaus culture broke down, the tribes of lesser beings – unable to follow their masters in their pursuit – began a diaspora across Elyden, where their blood became diluted with that of other races and they eventually died out, their father too preoccupied with his own obsession to care. Those amongst them who achieved true eternity through klados became miserably secular creatures, their time spent researching better ways to achieve immotality, their thousands of followers, retainers and slaves existing only to aid them in their quest. Their solitary city-states warred against one-another in the pursuit of resources and chemicals needed in their timeless compulsion. By the latter days of the Third Age the lhaus were reduced to a few dozen miserable totalitarian city states, hidden from the rest of the world in western Kharkharadontis. Memory of their tribe was almost lost by the dawn of the Fourth-Age and it was only the actions of the aggressive city-state of Thamaaz (over a thousand miles south of what is now known as Erebeth) and its ruler, Leontoeida, Lord of the Clades, in the mid Fourth-Age (c. -4500 RM), who scoured the lands around his city for miles around, searching for further secrets to immortality and his arsenal of slumbering klada. With the increase of the Shadow in the Desert and the world's decline, contact with the city was lost and the lhaus survive in Thracian legends and the Yothshammanei tablets, found in a temple in the north-eastern Daened Sulrach in c. 750 RM that is believed to be a mortuary complex dedicated to the wasted iterant of an unnamed Clade Lord.
                Little is known of the original appearance of the lhaus though various records of the general form taken by the Clade Lord iterants are known, and are commonly dscribed as grotesque: exposed musculature over porcelain-like bones of artificial manufacture. Most have intricate head crests, like shields, and are without sensory organs of any kind.[/spoiler]

Plagi: [spoiler]one of the Two-and-Twenty tribes, and original children of the demiurge Rachanael. Of dark skin, red eyes and horned brows, the plagi were a powerful if not populous tribe, their martial prowess and penumbral skill earning them the enmity of many other tribes. Their territories were never expansive, and they rarely emerged from the gargantuan dry basin that makes up what is now the wasted land of Kharkharadontis. Though considered by others to be children of the Penumbra, they were not immune to its effects and survived its corruption largely due to the aegis of their father Rachanael.
With Rachanael's imprisonment in Daekyn in the dying days of the Fourth-Age, the plagi were left leaderless. At the mercy of the Penumbra, their bodies became prone to corruption. To escape its effects, many amongst them left Kharkharadontis in a great exodus that saw them travelling south, where they would become lost to imperial annals; and north and north-east to the to the Daened Sulrach and Umbra Solare, where their breeding with humans would dilute the race into what later become known as the Etheri Nomads.
             The few that remained in their homelands haunt the regions around the pit of Daekyn, never moving far from their father's prison, little more than mindless husks driven by a consuming bitterness. The Archpotentate Malichar's arrival there in 212 RM saw the remaining plagi join him in his travels where they sojourned in Nyala before aiding him in the construction of the Leaden Throne, upon which the newly-liberated Rachanael would be interred. With that deed was the long history of the plagi ended, their last known descendants becoming known as the demiurnes of Rachanael. In their place Rachanael adopted humans as his children.
             What few true plagi remain do so in isolation or in distant lands, inhabiting the near-mythical metropolis of Kharakhara, their sorcerer-kings protecting them from the foulness of the Penumbra there.[/spoiler]

Giganri: [spoiler](Imperial: sûnéanthros, compare with anthslach). One of the original Two-and-Twenty mortal tribes, the children of the Demiurge Urakabarameel. The Giganri, alongside humans, are one of the tribes that have changed the least since their original creation. They are referred to as goliaths by the Korachani empire and giants by nations farther east, which have had even less contact with them over the years. The giganri are an insular race, separated by the rest of Elyden by the near-inassailable natural wall known as the Black Mountains that flanks the western shore of the Skarosian Gulf and the treacherous waters of the Sea of Serpents in the west of the Inner Sea.
            They stand roughly twice the height of an average humans, though their legs are proportionately longer than those of humans, giving them a somewhat lanky gait. Despite this they are prodigiously strong of both body and mind, with their culture placing a great deal of importance in asceticism and martial perfection and moderation. Their bodies bear signs of an earthly heritage, and their skin is cold and rough to the touch like the granite and marble from which legend (falsely) claims they were shaped. Likewise, their skin can range in colour from alabaster-white to obsidian-black and a myriad of other colours in-between.
            Though little is known about them, it is believed that they are a race of many castes, likely determined by their colouration, with different castes including the upälant, a black skinned variety that is the most documented by Korachani explorers and traders of the Skarosian Gulf, sometimes seen in the mines of Adamati, though any attempts to follow them back west invariably fail. The maramari are an off-white colour with green veins and are the most silent and morose of all giganri encountered, pensive and slow to action. Carnous are red-brown skinned, and stand taller than others, appearing to be a martial caste.
           Generally, the Giganri are introverted and quiet beings, likely to be considered slow by other races for their reticence to speak that stems from their calculating natures. Little is known of the culture save their extreme asceticism and their devotion to the philosophy of alchemy and Gnosticism, lending them a mystical air.
They are amongst the more populous mortal races, after the dominance of humans and are common in both western Llachatul, as well as Menisucs. It is commonly believed that oghurs are a degenerate offshoot of giganri, with many blaming penumbral taint or cannibalism as their source.[/spoiler]

the Forgotten: [spoiler]One of the original Two-and-Twenty tribes, and children of the demiurge Abufihamat (later known as Baphomet). Once one of the most powerful and wealthy of the Two-and-Twenty tribes, they were oppressed to the point of desperation by Abufihamat. A few amongst them came to secretly worship a diametricly opposed corruption of the Demiurge, who became known by the name of its idol – Baphomet. These heretics were persecuted and slain without abandon, though their roots were set deep and the cult spread. Abufihamat, punished alongside the rest of the Two-and-Twenty, fell from grace, greatly weakened. That, coupled with a tribe that was rapidly abandoning it for the blameless excesses offered by Baphomet, almost destroyed Abufihamayt, who sought the aid of the heretics, offering them that which they sought in return for fealty. It was granted, and Abufihamat finally died, replaced by Baphomet.
            Baphomet ignored its true children and instead sought the embrace of alien tribes, who it bribed with gold and fecund capriform idols. Growing weak and sickly from their excesses, Baphomet's true children were allowed to all but die, surviving in minute numbers that scattered from their homeland in bitterness.
          Since that time the handful of Baphomet's true ancestors survive as strange alien beings, their bodies tall and gangly, their features inhuman, that live on the fringes of society, in places shunned by civilisation – marshes, wastelands, barren places. Known only as the Forgotten, any memory of their past history relinquished, they are now neolithic hunter-gatherers, sullen, aloof and xenophobic, living in large communal tents, as they once were under the auspices of Abufihamat.[/spoiler]

Vapula: [spoiler]One of the original Two-and-Twenty tribes, and children of the demiurge Arimaspi. Though arimaspi is known for the many creatures and beings that he created, his true children are the vapulim. Humanoids standing around 7-feet tall, they are bulky yet graceful, with leonine features and feathered backs, heads and forearms and tool-wielding hands with opposable thumbs.
They were once a populous race dominating the arid lands of the ancient world, though have lessened over the march of time. They have been thought extinct for many years though a relatively large number were found to remain in the nation of Datepha on the island of Isea, in the south of Elyden. What led to their diminishing across Elyden is unknown and little reference is made to them in the Mythologia Elyden or other ancient texts. This is likely, as though the vapulim are Arimaspi's true children, they (like the other mortal races) were not crafted through his direct actions. He is known to have poured his love and passion into his other creations (like the aiklahs, eelyouhns, haagenti, griffins and sphinxes) and likely abandoned the vapulim.[/spoiler]

Sieth: [spoiler]one of the original Two-and-Twenty tribes, and children of the Demiurge Neith. Very little is known of them other than their association with the Ivory Moon and their purported homeland in what is now Malan.[/spoiler]

Shie: [spoiler](also Shy) one of the original Two-and-Twenty tribes, and children of the Demiurge Sybaris. They are of russet skin and possess four arms with delicate curving horns atop their brows beneath which glare feral yet beateous features. Like their mother, they are beings of carnal passion and are epicureans.
Never a numerous race, they largely excluded themselves from world-wide events and are never noted as participating, as a race, in any large wars or conflicts. Instead they are largely recorded as explorers of the contemporary world and pockets of them can still be found in small numbers metropolitan regions, where they can mostly be found as individuals, studying hedonism.[/spoiler]

Catachis: [spoiler]one of the original Two-and-Twenty mortal races, and children of the Demiurge Dopellanich. Though extant examples are rare, the histories of Elyden describe them, much like their primogenitor, as dualistic beings. Twin births are the norm and as such their societies across the continents and time have always revolved around the sacred bond between siblings and in many respects twins were regarded as a single person in two bodies. Conjoined births were somewhat common and of a more stable form than similar births amongst other mortals, which are seen as an aberration of sorts. As such they were regarded as high-born, granting measure of prestige upon their families and commonly becoming part of the priestly-caste. Single births are conversely seen as weak and such unfortunates tend to live hollow lives of ridicule, often forcing them into self-imposed exile.
           Physically, they are little different to humans, though their craniums are slightly bulging when compared with humans, and their fingers are long and delicate, though neither can be use to truly identify such mortals. Conjoined twins usually take the form of a symmetrical four-armed body (one pair smaller than the other, below it, often considered vestigial and bedecked in jewels amongst the wealthy) and a single head with two faces, one facing left, the other right; though other less symmetrical morphologies are common.[/spoiler]

Irkalla: [spoiler]one of the original Two-and-Twenty mortal races, and children of the Demiurge Nergaal. Little is known of these people, save the tantalising clues left behind on subterranean monoliths on the island of the same name, off the south-western coast of Cuth. What little we know is that they were a base civilisation in which the sick were worshipped (seen as favoured of Nergaal) and the strong broken of their will and used as slaves. A sun cult was (despite the subterranean nature of the monuments on which the records were found) at the centre of the race; though where other sun cults deified light and warmth, this cult saw instead the need to pay tribute to the devastating nature of sun; drought, plague and heat. This might be indicative of the races' retreat to the caverns beneath their home; perhaps as a sign of reverence or fear.[/spoiler]

Irothan: [spoiler]one of the original Two-and-Twenty mortal races, and children of the Demiurge Nyarloth. Little is known of this race other than it was all but destroyed following a brutal civil war. The war came about following the internment of the Demiurge Nyarloth within a soul-engine, following his murder at the hands of the Demiurge Rachanael, who helped him construct the machine (with the intent of using it for his own gain). His body remained, becoming a stone-like edifice known as the Host.
            The majority of irothani came to worship the Host, rather than the contents of the engine, leaving Nyarloth weak and in a state of torpor within the Soul-engine. The irothan rulers, known as Septs, knew the error of this idolatry and tried to persuade the people that their god was the machine and not the idol, but most people did not listen, this resulted in a civil war that tore the ironthani empire asunder, bringing to an end one of the largest and most long-lived mortal empires in Elyden.
            Physically they were similar to humans though their skin had a bluish tint and their eyes glowed as though with an inner light.[/spoiler]

Aithar: [spoiler]One of the original Two-and-Twenty mortal races, and children of the Demiurge Malachai, who became corrupted into the Alakhi (or 'bidekin'). Little is known of the Aithar, though the Al akhi, which survive in Stolas, north of the Empire are well-catalogued. Like their ancestors, the Al akhi are an insular race, regarded as somewhat of a rarity to most outsiders and unknown to those in distant lands.
            They stand roughly 6 – 7' tall and are of emaciated frames and overlong spindly limbs (their totem-lords [primitive priests] in particular seem to suffer from the condition). Their bodies are hairles, though primitive feathers (often spine-like) are common on their forearms, backs, necks and shins, which are more prominent on males. Their heads are muzzled by long slender beaks, which limit their vocal abilities (al akhi language is nonetheless complex, and relies heavily on the written form; seen in their many rune-tablets and cavern-epics). The al akhi are prone to distorted features and aberrant forms are not unusual, with a rare few appearing as little more than misshapen beasts.
            Al akhi society is tribal and revolves heavily around idolatry: traditionally that of an anthropomorphic avian totem known as Merkabh, which is believed by scholars and mythologists to be a corrupted form of the now-dead Demiurge Malachai. Males are dominant in these societies, though females do play in important role in the creatures' primitive religion. Important members of society are mummified and placed in niches within family hovels, where they remain with their tribes as ancestral figures, who the birdmen pray to in times of personal trouble (in a practive similar to Sauan and Temujan ancestral spirit worship).
            Like most of Elyden's beast-men, al akhi are fetishists and of a poor technological position. They fashion crude metal weapons but seem to have little affinity for clothing and armour beyond rags (they wear little clothing and use heavy wattle shields only rarely), though they have been known to scavenge ruined metal from  the Desolation of Astudan (particularly the passage the Red Route takes through it on its way to Gâtha), though such forays outside Stolas are rare or sporadic at best.[/spoiler]

Human: [spoiler]one of the Two-and-Twenty mortal tribes, and the children of the Demiurge Avraham the White King. Humans are unique in that they are the only mortal race that can breed with other races naturally and unaided (physical restrictions permitting), leading to many various half-breed races and creatures. None truly know the origins of this trait, though it is believed to lie within the nature of their father, Avraham.
                Humans were abandoned by Avraham following the appearance of the Azor (descendants of unions between humans and his scion Azer), whom he regarded far more highly. Humans were later adopted by the Demiurge Rachanael.' is not a valid dice string![/spoiler]

Keratin: [spoiler]one of the Two-and-Twenty mortal tribes, and the children of the Demiurge Kharani. They resemble humans in most ways, with males averaging 6-feet tall and weighing 180 – 190 lbs. They are heavily built, with powerful bodies and hard bony ridges on their elongated heads, with horns prominent amongst males and often seen as a mark of strength. Their skin ranges from pale grey to a dark brown, with various shades in between, and a red tint is considered as a sign of virility.
                Much like their Demiurge father, the Keratin are a passionate people, quick to anger and skilled with their hands – something that they commonly apply to the crafting of weapons and tools and cenotaphs and triumphal arches. Their culture traditionally revolved around a stratocracy or kratocracy, with the strong ruling the weak, commonly under a militaristic regime.
                Though a strong and united race, the Keratin were relatively few in number, particularly when compared with the vastly superior humans. Their numbers dwindled during the Shadow War that ended the Fourth-Age of Mortal life, where they allied themselves with Rachanael and were used as shock troops to deadly yet phyrric effect.[/spoiler]

Deruweid: [spoiler]one of the Two-and-Twenty mortal tribes, and the children of the Demiurge Achaiah. They are generally tall (between 7 – 9 ft.), with their skin undergoing a transition throughout their long lifes. The young have malleable greyish green skin that flakes at the joints (like sloughing birch). As they grow older their skin appears to calcify, becoming darker and tougher, like gnarly bark. Hairless, they are an ascetic race, without cities or clothing; aloof and xenophobic, living the last of their declining days in the shadow of their Demiurge mother in the deepest reaches of the Nameless Forest.
Abandoned to their own devices with their mothers' transformation into the Immortal Tree Agen, the deruweids filled the void left in their lives with bodily mutilation, thought by contemporary scholars as being a form of chastisement for what they perceived to be their own faults. The deruweid s dwindled over the years, though eventually those who remained in their old homeland (in what is now the Nameless Forest) would rediscover their old mother, realising the true error of their ways, devoting their lives to maintaining the Tree of Agen and slowly shaping their bodies in her image.[/spoiler]

Ropohaii: [spoiler]one of the Two-and-Twenty mortal tribes, and the children of the Demiurge Vorropohaiah. Swallowed by the Prison Carceri in antiquity, little is known of this strange race other than the madness which is known to have been passed down to them by their father.[/spoiler]

Merill: [spoiler]one of the Two-and-Twenty mortal tribes, and the children of the Demiurge Shibboleth, and the only known aquatic (or semi-aquatic race). There are seven different lines of merill: one for each of the original mortals that came into being following the shaping of the Demiurges, though of seven only one remains strong (or known), with the other diminished and corrupted: for the torrent that once sustained them is now gone.. They are most well-known amongst other races for a curious trait known as genetic memory, where a newly born merill inherits the memories of all its direct ancestors, all the way back to one of the original seven merills. As a result they are brimming with emotion and memory, though have little empathy, particularly with other races. They are beings of emotion, though unlike keratin and illidraen it is not a personal passion, but an echo of their many ancestor's lives – pain, suffering, love, loss death. Most surviving members have been driven mad by the weight of memories that bear down upon them, and every generation grows slowly more maddened. Indeed, in many respects they are the closest of the mortal races to the Otherworlders.
                They are linked to the river Shibboleth, which bears more than just a name in common with their demiurge forebear. They each undertake a long coming of age ritual by going upstream to the river's main source, where they immerse themselves in the water. This somehow causes them to reach sexual maturity (Some scholars think this is due to certain chemicals in the water or some other physical effect that causes a metabolic change), though the proliferation of humans around the river sees fewer and fewer merills complete this arduous ritual.
They tend to talk in stream of consciousness, which is difficult for other mortal races to understand. Very little is known of them, and what is known is likely misunderstood though as Elyden's seas retreat, soapstone metropolises have begun to appear in the middle of once-submerged seas, built on volcanic atolls. Where they survive they rely on coastal raids on ill-protected places far away from the Korachani empire.[/spoiler]

Rarevas: [spoiler]one of the Two-and-Twenty mortal tribes, and the children of the Demiurge Ryhassharauch. The children of the stillborn demiurge, These beings were cursed before their conception and exist as void, hollow, wretched things more akin to languid corpses than anything living. The stench of vinegar and rotting flesh surrounds their bony grey bodies. They keep their umbilical cords and make necklaces out of them in memory of their catatonic god. Legends claim that only seven exist in a fugue state between life and death, unable to die or reproduce.[/spoiler]

been a while since I've posted anything here, as it's been a case of writing up my notes in a more presentable way. Anyhow, what follows is a primer for the world of Elyden that I wrote for a tentative sourcebook (as well as my own perusal). It's quite a big chunk of text though it details the world's flavour quite well.


an  Unremembered History
Elyden is a unique world that plays with many tropes commonly seen in other roleplaying games, eliminating others and expanding on some to create a world that is truly its own. Some things taken for granted in other fantasy worlds might be very different in Elyden, so nothing is to be taken for granted.
Much of what is presented below is beyond the ken of the general populace (indeed it is unlikely that the entirety of the following pages is known to a single individual in Elyden, and were an individual to learn such things it is all too likely he would despair from the discovery, for such is the nature of such things in Elyden), this ancient history has paved the way for that which followed. Much as we are shaped by the actions of our ancestors, so too has this unremembered history moulded the extant empires and personalities of the world, whether they know it or not.
Though it is advised that the GM familiarise himself with the below beginning play, it is assumed that most player characters will know next to little or none of the below. Exceptions amongst player characters are not uncommon, especially in the case of scholars or mythologists who have dedicated their lives to unearthing the secrets of the Demiurges.
The details that are the most widespread amongst the common populace throughout the world are also included at the end of this section, in what is known as Lore.

the Demiurges & the Creation of Elyden
Once there were Two-and-Twenty worker gods, themselves created to shape the Material Realm into something befitting the arrival of the immortal races – the sole rightful inheritors of the Material Realm. From the Matter that congealed where the Shadow below met the Helix above, the Demiurges crafted the world of Elyden, her beauteous coastlines, fertile oceans and fecund forests. Though the Two-and-Twenty were all master artificers and shapers of worlds, each had his or her own strength or character – 22 different reflections of the same whole.

the Great Shaping
And so the Demiurges used their emotions and thoughts in shaping the Material, creating (amongst others, it is believed) the Orb of Elyden. Their creator saw what the Demiurges made and was pleased, yet its dream of Life was not yet complete. Indeed, it had only begun. There could not be life until the Material was perfected to carry such a burden. But so wondrous was the Demiurge's work that their creator sowed seven times Two-and-Twenty seeds within the skin of the newly created Elyden. These seeds would one day hatch into the immortal races – the true inheritors of Elyden.
Two-and-Twenty pods were sown, each bearing seven seeds. Each pod was a facsimile of both the creator and a single Demiurge, in whose honour each pod was created. Thus the seeds would be the Demiurges' children; the grandchildren of the creator: the Immortals.
Yet the Demiurges did not agree on what perfection was – each had his or her vision of beauty and each had his or her own passion, not all of which sat harmlessly besides those of their siblings. And so, united in their task, yet disparate in their methods, the Demiurges continued to toil, fashioning Elyden with thoughts and dreams. And somehow, perfection was achieved.
Their task complete, the Demiurges saw what they had shaped and were pleased. And they spoke as one, 'It is done. Perfection is come to the Material. Now we wait for the Great Shaper to bring life to our love.'
And so they ceased their work, but empowered by the beauty of what they had wrought upon Elyden, the Demiurges saw not the heart to abandon their artifice. As is the manner with all works of art, the Demiurges looked upon the Material and saw imperfections. Like an artist who tinkers with a finished masterpiece for too long, the Demiurges could not let go.
Each toiled to shape Elyden into a place of personal perfection and together they spoilt what they had already achieved. This created a discord within the Material that would forevermore mar the face of Elyden. This new Elyden became a discordant place, a dichotomous land where beauty might bring pain, where life may come from death, where despair may lead to love.
So it was that Elyden was created, world of Light and Darkness and in that light and darkness, spurred on by the discord, the Seeds of Dawn hatched before their time, bringing Fourth premature creatures into a world unready for them.
Elyden was then not as she is now – the mountains, oceans and skies of today are merely the desiccated fossils of what the Demiurges originally wrought. In her nascent imperfect form Elyden was a place of chaos that the immortals' embryonic senses could not hope to comprehend. It would take aeons for her beauty to distil into a form appreciable to the senses of those poor beings forced into life prematurely.

by Hubris Born
The immortals, though sown by greater hands, were given life through the hubris of the Demiurges, who were themselves not entirely divine. But like a babe ejected prematurely from its mother's womb, unable to comprehend the world it was brought into, the immortals could not understand the world around them, nor could they understand themselves. Despairing, their minds aflame with sensations that should never be felt, the immortals became hollow shells next to the perfect forms they should have been.
And thus the immortals were created, through the unthinking actions of the Demiurges. They were immortal in nought but name, indeed they were mortal.
The Demiurges were punished for their hubris and were sent down to Elyden to continue shaping the Material Realm into something more habitable to the poor mortals, who became their wards. Consigned to the Material Realm they found their greatest powers of shaping dwindled, though their dreams and emotions yet held the power to shape the world. Unwillingly they became the leaders of the mortal tribes and slowly led their charges along the path that suited each the best. Some Demiurges learnt to adapt to this new life better than others. Still some revelled in the glow of true life and the joys of experiencing things as mortals. Most, however, were greatly pained by what had come to pass. A few were consumed by despair. Yet all mourned their sundering from their creator.
Many amongst them came to be worshipped as living gods, and it was there, in the false glow of their followers, that they felt their strength return. Slowly the Demiurges abandoned the memory of their creator. In their punishment they had been martyred, with the mortals mistakenly looking upon them as their true creators.
The Demiurges were still driven by their creator's command to shape the Material, and they continued in their work while leading their tribes. Though their powers of craft were greatly diminished with their fall, they were still Demiurges and it was no wonder the mortals looked upon them as gods, for their abilities were still great. Their tribes grew to reflect the Demiurge's individual emotions and grew disparate from one another as their beliefs grew more dissimilar.
And so, the Demiurges grew separately and differently from one another, each coming to embody his own feelings, his own tribe mirroring his attitude and demeanour. The secrets of the Atramenta and Firmament were carefully disseminated amongst the mortals. This restored some of their strength, but they were still weak simulacra of their former selves. Now that they lived in Elyden, the Demiurges learnt quickly that their power waxed and waned with that of their followers and the years following the Demiurges' banishment were characterised by an incessant growth.
The Demiurges shaped their tribal lands to better suit the needs of their charges and promoted growth and aggression. Centuries of trade and expansion, of religious wars and conversion, of conflict and alliances followed and the Demiurges themselves waxed and waned alongside their children.

the Great Sundering
Millennia passed and the Demiurges ignored their creator, and the mortal races remained ignorant as to fact the beings they worshipped as gods were the reason for their tragic creation and imperfections. The creator slowly waned and eventually disappeared altogether.
The Demiurges felt this withdrawal like a man sundered from his loved one. From that moment on, the divine spark that had created them was extinguished forever. They remained Demiurges, and yet they were not.
Immediately, they felt shamed by what they had done, weak and foolish at the selfishness of their inaction. Some of the Demiurges became wholly insular, falling prey to dark thoughts their own actions begot; while others strove to rekindle the rotted link with their father. This created a great schism between the siblings, who had otherwise lived together without great quarrel. Some realised that in order to survive, the tribes needed to unite, while others, bitter at their fate, forgot the world and their duties and began plotting against the rest of Elyden and creating cruel incantations and hexes to secure yet more strength. Others fell into the deepest of despondency at their abandonment.
This propagated a long waning of the Demiurges. Generations of mortals came and went, dynasties rose and fell, empires flourished, struggled and died. In these epochs the mortals grew distant from their despairing parents who only continued to grow weak. Though in many regions they continued to be worshipped as deities, most cults were weak corruptions of the original faiths and the fervour with which they were once revered had lessened.
Over the years individual Demiurges or short-lived alliances amongst the siblings might have gained superiority but it was never to last, and ever victory was followed by millennia of waning.

a Divinity in Decline
Time passed and as the Demiurges continued to live in the shadow of their divinity, they came to realise that they were truly mortal.
With discovery of their mortality, most Demiurges lost interest in their charges and abandoned them before death done the same. Of course, the Demiurges still drew strength from what worshippers remained, misguided as they were.
The Demiurges and mortals may have abandoned each other, but the Legacy of the Two-and-Twenty was not gone. In their mortal forms the Demiurges had unions with their worshippers, creating powerful scions whose blood teemed with the power of the Demiurges. This blood thinned with each passing generation, but the signs remained – not in physical disparity, but the power of Shaping. Though the Demiurges had been stripped of their powers to shape, their progeny was not in such a way cursed.
In the absence of the Demiurges these scions became leaders and spiritual figures, holding together what they could of their tribes. But in time the tribes fragmented. The memory of their divine leaders was great and as their adulation of them simmered down into little more than memory, the tribes no longer remained Two-and-Twenty.
The golden age of mortals came to an end with the abandonment of the Demiurges. Nations merged, others separated and the memory of the Two-and-Twenty tribes of mortals left myth and fable, remaining only in the minds of the wisest of sages and those Demiurges still alive who cared to remember such things.
Like the tribes, memory of the Demiurges passed from memory into myth, and myth into obscurity. And as the number and size of tribes continued to warp, the Demiurges were truly forgotten. The scions of their bloodline became no more than petty kings and lords. Knowledge of the Firmament and the Atramenta corrupted over time, and people came to revere the spirits of the fallen. Others maintained half-true memories of the Demiurges and came to worship them as a pantheon of distant deities, similar in little but effect, with different names and guises in different nations. Others forsook all notion of a higher power and worshipped little more than life itself. Still others, voracious to discover the hidden truths that lay buried in soil and time, became servants to lore and uncovered scattered details of the Demiurges and the tribes of old.

Ancient Monuments
During their ascendancy the Demiurges shaped not only the natural landscape of Elyden, but they also constructed great edifices and monuments to their own glory. Even now, so many millennia after their erection, many of these cyclopean monuments survive. Overgrown and weathered, yet still glorious and echoing the true strength and majesty the Demiurges once evoked.
Those who come across such wondrous structures cannot help but marvel at the raw scale of their construction. Towers miles high constructed of a singular block of glass-like substance none can identify. Temples carved into the sides of entire mountain-ranges. Archaic machines, mostly now fossilised or calcified beyond repair.
Perhaps most renowned of these feats of the Demiurge's will made manifest is the Prison Carceri, a vast  network of caverns and dungeons that is believed to span the entire world. The vast mountain of the Varrachon is said to have been created from the waste debris of Carceri's construction. The region is baneful, with the air above the few openings into the world above fetid. Those few who have visited its depths have returned with their minds twisted, babbling about never-ending rooms, the glow of Elyden's heart illuminating every chamber, nonsensical architecture and grotesque characters.

a Life in Dreams
Though the names of the Demiurges remain in the roots and etymologies of hundreds of false gods and geographical features, few are those who can name them and their exploits. Most are now dead and forgotten and the few who millennia of mistaken transcriptions have not fully corrupted survive only as languid shells, and they are only capable of shaping the world through their dreams, willing or otherwise. The places close to the tombs of these ancient fossilised Demiurges are unholy places, mutable as a dream and inimically dangerous to mortals – the fabled Dreamscapes.
And it is through dreams that the greatest of the Demiurges' powers are made manifest. Their dreams disseminate what remains of their powers of shaping and it is through dreams that they communicate with mortals. To be touched by a Demiurge's dreams is no honour, and few who are so-chosen remain fully sane. Worst are those whose dreams become so embroiled in those of the Demiurges that their bodies become inert and they survive only in the nightmarish visions of the Demiurges' own dreamscapes. Some think that the physical dreamscapes surrounding the Demiurges tombs can act as gateways into the dreams of mortals around Elyden, though few forays through those somnabular gates end well.
Though the age of the Demiurges has long since passed, echoes of their reign remain and some can still be heard whispering their names and exploits. Resurrected cults of long-forsaken Demiurges may yet return in the catacombs beneath cities, where devotees whisper prayers to unknown entities they cannot hope to understand. The descendants of the Demiurges may yet be seen across the length and breadth of Elyden in the form of Scions though few may know the true horrors of their genealogy.
To those whose roots lie around the Inner Sea there is always the Undying Machine – that ever-present facet of the Demiurge Rachanael, whose reminds the wise that it is only circumstance that keeps a god dead or alive in Elyden.

the Tragedy of the Mortal Races
The truth behind the mortal races lies in a distant time that none now can recall. No written records date back to such times and the only recourse we have is to the uncertainties that the supranatural arts may glean from the otherworld and other clues that science can never verify. Different regions have their own creation myths that people follow without thought, though even disparate cultures divided by a thousand years and miles often share similar stories. It is through these similar stories that we may find a source closest to the truth, though be warned for the truth is so rarely a comforting tale.
What follows is a recounting rarely seen in so unadorned a format. Count your blessings and never regret that you amongst so few other luminaries and polymaths are privy to such secrets.
The Demiurges, upon shaping the Material Realm into something of perfection and beauty, were each gifted a pod containing seven seeds. From each seed would, in due course, emerge the immortals – four female and three male to each pod. The immortal were designed to inherit the perfect world. But their time had not yet arrived. It would take millennia for the seeds to germinate into perfection as the world around them settled into its final perfect form.
Yet in their vanity the Demiurges destroyed all they had worked for. They had achieved perfection yet grew restless in the wake of their great work. They continued to shape the world, doing only that which they had been created to. They added beasts and features that twisted the beauty of what was into something imperfect.
And thus was the perfect world of Elyden warped into something imperfect. The immortal pods hatched before their time amid the cacophony of the new imperfect world.  Born in mockery of what should have been: the immortal tribes became instead the mortal tribes. Embryonic, unwanted things granted sentience in a raw realm that was unready for and unwanting of them, they had little choice but to endure. 
The creator knew that what had happened had happened and could not be reversed. But the Mortals were innocent in their birth and the creator knew that any suffering they sustained was through no fault of their own. To make the cacophony of the Mortal Realm more bearable each mortal was given the smallest mote of divinity. Tiny it might have been but it was enough to serve as a cocoon against the raw world to which they were now inevitably bound. That tiny mote became lens through which they could interact with their world without the trauma under which they had been born. This mote became known as the spirit and it was the creator's only gift to the mortals.
With a spirit and senses capable of observing and experiencing the world around them, the mortals were strengthened, but they could not escape the death and disorder that their birth had subjected them to – forevermore the mortals would be plagued by the shadow of death and cursed by the weight of disorder.
Each pod became the root of a tribe of mortals; their minds and bodies shaped in the manner of the Demiurge in whose image they were ultimately fashioned. Under the aegis of their unwanted sires the Demiurges, the mortals grew. Slowly they inherited their sire's traits, coming to follow and resemble them in matters of body and mind.

the Unwanted Scions
And so, the Mortals came to be in a world that was not ready for them, to parents that did not want or care for them. They were the untimely spawn of deplorable compulsion.
As a result, it can be considered that all mortal races were ultimately born of the Demiurges' vanity, and that it was that same vanity that denied them the immortality and perfection that was theirs by right.
It is difficult to explain the true impact of this, for the mortals have, for unnumbered generations, lived in ignorance of this fact, accepting everything that is around them as natural. The truth could not be farther removed from that assumption: everything that is negative in Elyden – pain, death, corruption, disfigurement, loss, famine, toil – exists ultimately due to the actions of the Demiurges. Were it not for the Demiurges' hubris, the Two-and-Twenty mortals would have been born as they should have – fully-formed and immortal, inheritors of the perfect realm.
Those who learn this truth and truly understand its significance may find themselves distraught or bitter, in the very least. Some have gone insane trying to digest the facts and one cannot blame such sensitive individuals. There exist those in scholarly circles who, having learnt this grim prehistory of the mortal races, sees no fault in the Demiurges' actions, but rather a tragic purpose. Demiurges were born with a specific task in mind – to create and shape, and that is what they did.
These apologists are in the minority in a community of illuminated individuals that is already miniscule. The fact that such knowledge is printed in this volume may lessen the divide between ignorance and fact and it is something that is done with no-small intent.

a Lessening of Bloodlines
As ancient epochs came and went and the Demiurges machinations done little to restore their divinity, the mortals slowly spread across the world of Elyden. Some abandoned their homes, while others remained close with their Demiurge parents, learning from them. Others turned to the natural scions of the Demiurges – spawn of their misbegotten union with mortals and other Demiurges – following them instead.
The Demiurges themselves cared little for the mortals but what sustenance they could offer them, for it was the adulation of loving mortals that gave Demiurges the strength needed to endure. Many Demiurges had already created sentient life before the tragic birth of the mortal races and it was in these races that were truly created in the image of their parents that many demiurges devoted their attentions, despite the value of the mortals. Some Demiurges grew greedy and subjugated unwilling populaces, with others abandoning their original children entirely if the opportunity arose for more worshippers elsewhere. Yet what few learnt in this time was that similarly to how the Demiurges drew strength from their worshippers, the mortals also drew something from their divine parents – their identity. Without the compass of their divine parent to guide them many tribes found themselves diluted by the world, their idiosyncrasies buried beneath the void of abandonment. That and increasing contract with other tribes led to the slow death of the mortal races.
Where once each tribe was disparate, of physiognomy and psychology unique to itself, their slow spread to secular lives and false religions, as well as their spread and mingling across the world saw their heritage diluted. That, coupled with the actions of Demiurges that were at times genocidal in their effect, and many of the original races are now lost to history or despair, their only remnant corrupted bloodlines and half-human descendants. In some far-flung regions pockets of such tribes may remain, but they are invariably wretched things born in a world without guidance or reassurance.

first Amongst Equals
Of all the mortal races, humans are by far the most numerous. It is not their intelligence or an aptitude for survival that has propagated the vermin-like spread of their race across Elyden, but merely a coincidence that none of the other mortal races enjoyed. Humans were alone amongst the Two-and-Twenty mortal races to breed true with the other races. This alone has ensured the survival of humans above any other race. And that explains why half-breed races are so common – mulls and halfbloods, to name but two.
Other races to remain are the independent creations of the Demiurges – those sentient beasts crafted by the Demiurges before the coming of the mortals, but they are primal beings, without spirits or the pathos that plagues all of the Two-and-Twenty mortal races.

of Soulstones and Otherborn
Mortal spirits (the more of consciousness granted to the mortal races in wake of the premature births so long ago) migrate to the Otherworld upon expiry of their bodies, where they gestate in that timeless realm before perhaps being reborn as Otherworlders. 
That was not always the case, however. For countless millennia there was no transmigration of the spirit to the Otherworld. Upon death the spirit would remain attached to the body like parasite, slowly growing, as a mote of dust grows within an oyster. As the body slowly dried and fossilised, this soul pearl would continue to grow, often becoming the only thing to remain of a dead mortal. These soulstones as they are sometimes known contain that minute divine mote that every trueborn mortal possessed in life, and they are valued by shapers and others alike for their properties.
Though it was once rare for a mortal to leave behind a soulstone once spirits started to migrate to the Otherworld upon mortal death. A few instances have been noted, though overall it was an incredibly rare and sad event. That has changed recently as the instances of mortal corpses giving rise to soulstones has begun to increase over the past century. Though the numbers remain small, there is no doubt that they are on the increase. Scholars still struggle to understand why.   
No discussion about soulstones can be complete without mention of the otherworlders, for though their numbers may be few, their influence upon the fate of mortal life is great indeed. The otherworlders are the spirits of deceased mortals reincarnated in corporeal form upon the Material Realm. Legend claims their role is akin to that of the psychopomp, guiding the spirits of the living, though we cannot be sure, for they are utterly alien in nature – both physically and psychologically – and rarely do they communicate in simple terms.
Strangely, one of the most common ways they communicate with mortals is through sex, as the amount of halfblooded descendants that exist. Each otherworlder passes on particular traits to its offspring, and some believe that their purpose is to spread those traits amongst the mortal races, through which they can then influence fate.
Their offspring, commonly known as halfbloods, are far more numerous than their otherworldly sires, for their traits can be passed down for many generations before being diluted. Though not as alien as their otherworlder parents, halfbloods remain enigmatic creatures plagued by their dichotomous ancestry. They know they play a role in some greater purpose, though what that role is they can never know.

the Materia Omna
The Materia Omna is the centre of the universe. It exists within the smallest object imaginable and surrounds the totality of creation. It is the primordial element from which all else was created – the Firmament, the Atramenta, the Material Realm and everything that exists within them. It is the 'clay' that the Demiurges shaped into Material Realm, and it is from this 'clay' that most life was crafted. This is likely how the Materia Omna permeates everything – it was the original blueprint from which all else was created.
It is seen by many as a mystical element because of this, something likely to be found at the centre of philosophical movements. It cannot be seen or felt and it is very difficult to gain empirical evidence of its being, which is a cause of consternation for more pragmatic scientists.
It is likely that mortals know a lot less about the Materia Omna today than we did under the leadership of the Demiurges. Many secrets were lost following the Demiurges' fall and subsequent descent into languor.
The Materia Omna was probably rediscovered early days of the Fifth Age of life, over five millennia past. Yet despite in intervening centuries and untold hours of devoted study few are those who claim to understand its secrets.
Sometimes described as the Æther by ancient scholars, the Materia Omna was, at various points throughout history, thought to be the source of and secret to life in Elyden, a fabled panacea, as well as being the dwelling place of false gods. Ancient alchemists believed that should the Materia Omna be observed in solid form, its manipulation could produce any substance conceivable – for within it was the power of creation. And given that the dichotomous elements of the Firmament and the Atramenta both lie within its roots, that is not difficult to believe, though none have so far manage to distil the essence of the Materia Omna in physical form.

the Shadow and the Helix.
Though little is known about their united primordial form, much more is known of the Firmament and the Atramenta themselves. The paired elements through which the Material Realm was constructed have been known to mortals for millennia and even in the wake of the Demiurges' decline we have held on to the basics of these two elements.
The Firmament and Atramenta emerged from the roiling chaos that was the Materia Omna. How this happened is unknown though common origin myths state that a now-forgotten creator deity awoke, and the movements of its awakening caused the Materia Omna to churn, causing its constituent parts to separate like oil and water. The truth will likely never be known.
Whatever the reason for the Materia Omna's eventual separation, where the two elements (the Firmament and the Atramenta) touched they created a film that would later be shaped by the Demiurges into the Material Realm – a region where Elyden is located.
Though the Materia Omna is a largely unseen force, the Firmament and the Atramenta (or the Helix and the Shadow, as they are more commonly known in the twin Empires) are very much on our doorstep and are relatively easily manipulated by those who know how.
Even to those without the knowledge of shaping, the Firmament and the Atramenta are known and their influence can be felt everywhere – lodestones, duststone, Atramental corruption, petrifying deserts, electricity, the list goes on.

the Shaping of Creation
Most cultures understand the principles of the Materia Omna and though some may distrust its twin elements (citing detrimental experiences), others have accepted the Firmament and the Atramenta as elements to be used (and abused), like any other.
Both pose their dangers, however. The Atramenta is highly mutable and prolonged exposure can lead to debilitating effects upon body and mind, and as well as inorganic matter. The Firmament promotes stagnancy that can lead to petrification. Both can be highly inimical to life (as evidenced by the growing numbers of Atramental or Firmamental wastelands that exist throughout Elyden) yet disciplined empirical study of their properties has led to many advancements that would have been otherwise impossible. This is all possible thanks to those who have studied the Firmament and the Atramenta, as well as those who are capable of shaping those disparate elements – Onésimus and Set, respectively, or more commonly known simply as shapers.
Shapers are allowed to do what they do through the inherent malleability of the elements of creation. It is thought that the Demiurge's shaping of the Materia Omna, as well as the Firmament and the Atramenta, left the elements far more malleable to manipulation than they otherwise might have been. Some believe that by shaping the Materia Omna the Demiurges imparted part of their creative essence in the elements, making them malleable to mortals.
There are four types of Shapers. The most common by far are those who tap into either the Firmament or the Atramenta, manipulating their constituent parts to achieve various results. The third, type is the rare shaper who has equal control over the Atramenta and the Firmament. The fourth far rarer type of shaper, is one who interferes directly with the Materia Omna. The results are often similar but the potential for variety is near-infinite.
When shaping the Firmament or the Atramenta a shaper is limited by what the respective element touches, or its sphere of influence. It is near-impossible to directly create light through the Atramenta, for instance. Those rare individuals who can shape the Materia Omna have no such limitations, as their patron element permeates everything in this world and others.
Even amongst fellow shapers, there exists differing spheres of influence. An individual shapers' abilities will typically only affect a small part of the Atramenta or Firmament (depending on his element of proficiency). This is known as his sphere of influence, of which there are a many. This is why not all Atramentists can accomplish the same things. Some may be adept at weaving flesh, where others might be experts of ferromancy. Still others might be able to dabble in various spheres, while never being able to achieve the heights of those who specialise. No two shapers will ever display the same exact affinities, though there are institutions that attempt to standardise their use, labelling certain acts of shaping as falling within particular spheres. These categorisations are largely arbitrary though the institutions that utilise them swear by them. A case in point is the various Atramental Minasteria of the High Empire.

the Wonder of Technarcana
Through our understanding of the Atramenta and the Firmament modern man has been able to accomplish great feats of artifice and engineering that have not been seen since the days of the Demiurges. We have developed cures and vaccines for diseases that would have slain millions. We have developed treatments to make metals stronger, lighter or more resistant to corrosion. We have refined the Atramenta raw state (known as umbriska) into fuels and other substances through which we can power engines and machines. We can bend the magnetic properties of the Firmament to our will, creating batteries that store energy.
It is solely through our knowledge and manipulation of the Materia Omna that the scientific discipline of technarcana has become possible. Finally we can step out of the shadow of our ancient ancestors and claim the future for our own. Where once shamen and arcanists ruled tribes of men, now we place our trust in technologists and technarcanists who maintain the great engines that sustain the great metropolises of our time – Almagest, Teigris, Hetepheropolis and Makhara, to name a few – are possible. Siphon engines that draw otherwise baleful properties of the Atramenta keep these populated lands safe; dross manufactories produce the edible slurry that keeps dense populations of millions alive; and it is in technarcance ateliers that beast engineered to serve us are created. Not least of all are the servant castes, such as the haemonculi or steel legionnaires that owe their very existence to the technarcane arts.

the Primal Disciplines
Though we praise the technarcanists whose efforts  allow our modern technarcane engines to work, their link to the Materia Omna has dwindled to a prosaic fragment of what it once was. There is no mysticism or spirituality inherent in the works of a machinist or mechanic. These are no true shapers of the material of creation.
Though diminished in urbane lands, there remain those who look upon the Materia Omna with wonder and marvel. These are the modern shamen and arcanists – urban occultists and dabblers in the primal arts. In less advanced cultures (or on the fringes of our own lands, where technarcana remains rare or too expensive to reliably maintain) we can still find those who fill out the roles of more traditional sorcerers and warlocks. These individuals eschew the trappings of their modern counterparts – the technarcana and machines – take a more direct approach to the act of shaping.
Such individuals are dangerous for they wrestle with great powers without any degree of training. It is not uncommon for such an untrained individual to consume himself through overexertion, killing themselves and those around them in blasts of raw Atramental or Firmamental energies.

the Otherworld
The Realm Beyond. The Æther. The Otherworld. It has may names, though few truly understand it. It is the realm outside of time and space, where the dead and unborn dwell. Like the Material Realm, the Otherworld is a part of the Materia Omna, though it is its own entity.
Some shapers can transport themselves to the Otherworld or call upon its denizens (otherworlders not yet reborn to the Material Realm) to aid them in their studies, though such travel is dangerous and taxing on the senses. As a timeless realm many have sojourned in the Otherworld for seemingly months to fond mere days or hours to have passed in the Material Realm. Even worse, an otherwise short sojourn may result in decades or centuries having passed in the Material Realm, leading to the shaper returning to a world that cannot recall his presence.
It is through the otherworld that other forms of mystical travel – dream walking and planar projections, for instance – are rendered possible, though the otherworld is a fickle element and it is unwise to venture into such mutable realms unprepared.   

ancient Empires and buried Glories
Elyden is an ancient place. Modern thinking has the sphere of Elyden as being around 1 billion (1,000,000,000) years old, with the Demiurge' acts of shaping and the birth and spread of the mortal races following that.
It is an almost immeasurable time that few outside the intelligentsia of the most learned scholarly circles may even hope to comprehend. It is time enough for the original creations of the Demiurges to naturally change and branch into forms unthought of by their creators. It is time enough for Elyden's coastlines and continents to slowly change. It is time enough or the memory of vast empires and their descendants to be forgotten to all but the most esoteric of otherworlders and arcane researchers.
Memory of the mortal tribes is fragmented at best and few are those who can name the Two-and-Twenty races on more than one hand. Even their descendants and their descendants are unknown to most. Little wonder then that so much of our prehistory lies buried, turned to dust by the passage of time.
Cities are often built on the site of past cities, so long as the geography hasn't changed to the point of the location being uninhabited. As a result, many cities are built atop the ruins of previous incarnations, sometimes dating back tens of thousands of years, though few may know this. Under the Demiurge's aegis many metropolises and other edifices were built to last eternities and some millennia-old ruins may yet be explored in the Elyden's wildernesses. 
The Demiurges and their Scions, consigned to oblivion for so long are only remembered through the Archpotentate Malichar and his actions in resurrecting the languid Rachanael to life. Ironically, it was his obsession with ensuring the other Demiurges remain buried that has even brought their memory to light in the lands around the Inner Sea. Though even so, dead gods do not remain so for ever. 

A World in Waning
We know through the meticulous records of cartographers throughout the Fifth Age that Elyden's oceans are retreating. Great harbours constructed along the coastlines of 5 millennia past are now located miles inland, surrounded by salt flats and the memory of more abundant times.
Seas that were once fertile have been overfished by starving nations to barrenness, where elsewhere lakes and rivers have been corrupted by the presence of the Atramenta and manufactories, their colours changed from crystal-clear waters to garish chemical-tainted hues.
It is the belief of many that the Demiurges absence has had an adverse effect on the natural world. Without their aegis the laws of nature have slowly begun to unravel, leaving the world in the beginning of a chaos that many fear can only grow worse. Increasingly women give birth to misshapen shapes, and in the wild beasts often become tainted into unnatural shapes with even strange abilities.
Detractors of this theory need only look to the dreamscapes that surround the Demiurges' tombs for proof of their ability to warp reality. Were they awake and strong they could target their thoughts to those lands that need maintaining, but alas such is not the case.
Unless the status quo that has reigned for millennia is broken and the Demiurges are raised from their polluted slumber, it is unlikely that Elyden will recover. Though most are blind to this decay, those who have studied the past know that a great Dark Age beckons unless the Demiurges can be stirred.
And what if they are? It is impossible to see what a newly arisen Demiurge might be capable of. Would it even care for the fate of the world? It is disturbing then to know that many demiurge cults have arisen with the sole intent of waking the slumbering gods and their scions.

Blind Ritual and Reflex Sacraments
Elyden is an old world, with present cities built on the ruin of their forebears. Those ruins hark to city-states that inherited traditions and cultures form nations that came millennia before, who in turn developed customs in the wake of the original mortal tribe's passing.
This blind dissemination of past rituals is something that proliferates the extant world, with people observing sacraments – be they religious, cultural, political or industrial – without truly understanding why. The bureaucracy of the Korachani empire dates back four millennia, and there exist halls of records where censuses and records that have no bearing on the present age are kept, just because that is the way it has always been. The Tethysian funerary tradition of burying the dead with a blue gem has existed since before the birth of their nation, though few are those who remember its origins or indeed its purpose. Yet people still do it.
Such rituals proliferate in this waning world, perhaps providing comfort or a sense of purpose to those who live in these twilight days.   

Twilight Empires 
As the natural world itself begins to unravel, so to do the ancient empires that have governed civilised life for millennia. The Korachani empire, a monolithic entity that has surrounded the Inner Sea for over four millennia has fractured and struggled to find resources to maintain its sprawling cities and institutions.
To the south, in the great desert-continent of Sammaea, there exist countless city-states, each descended from great empires that failed in their pursuit of longevity. These states are ruled by grotesque and often unique characters whose tyranny urges their people to struggle and scavenge amid the rotten remnants of past empires
Though elsewhere nations may yet endure that reflect the paragon of civilisation, one only need sift through the deception of appearance for the corruption that lies beneath...

Despair and Decay
It is to this world of growing despair and decay that we invite you to travel. Whether you seek the decrepit streets and alleys of millennia-old cities that collapse under the weight of their own infrastructure, or the wasteland city-states that cling to survival amid the collapse of the natural world, there is much to be seen.
Elyden is a world made for opportunists. The Fifth Age, likely drawing now to a close, was born of the survivors of the wane of the Fourth Age. It was through their intrepid actions that empires were allowed to rise and fall and the same will only be possible through the actions of their descendants.
   

sure, it's just a matter of making my notes a bit more 'presentable' :)

QuoteA brief History of Elyden
Through the recent research of scholars and physicists (based largely in Tethra, Parthis), Elyden now is thought to be over one billion (1,000,000,000) years old, a result acquired through meticulous observation of rock strata, astronomical calculations and various other factors. These findings expand the history of Elyden greatly from what can now be considered the mistaken beliefs of the past, many of which were based on the old myths, such as those found in the 'Scripture of Shadows' (on which the Church of the Machine and its subsequent descendants – the Orthodox Church of Rachanael and the Reformed Machine church, are based) and other holy tomes across Elyden, most of which place her age at a far more modest one-hundred million (100,000,000) years.
            This new theory of Elyden's age, first proposed in 3995 RM, and originally greeted by little support, casts doubt on the verity of many myths and legends that proliferate the written and oral traditions of cultures across the globe, whose weight came from the otherwise inexplicable commonality shared between origin stories of nations and peoples separated by oceans and gulfs of time, as well as the perceived common-tongue from which all others are thought to have evolved. Were it not for the greater matter of the decaying world, the revelation of the new theory of Elyden's age would have undoubtedly brought more chaos than it has, with many fundamentalist and extremist groups opposing it.
            We can apply the events of the Mythologia Elyden to the new evidence and the associated theories, and produce some interesting hypotheses. Given the proposed age of Elyden we can deduce that the Demiurges are at least ~1,000,000,000-years old, and possibly far older. The sowing of the mortal seeds and their subsequent germination into the first example Two-and Twenty mortal, take place at indeterminate points during the Age of Myth and the First Age of Mortal life, respectively, and consequently we can only guess at where they fit in to the timeline of Elyden.

The Age of Myth: the Four Great Acts of Shaping
A cyclopean time that exists outside the realms of physics and understanding, the Age of Myth is something that we can only approach understanding through the intervention of some Otherworlders and the explorations of those whose abilities allow them to peer outside the domains of time and space. Such extraordinary beings, alongside theologians and mythographers describe this 'period' as the Sea of Chaos (known in Korachan as the Ananth). It is a time outside of time, and a place without matter, incomprehensible to the mortal mind.
            From this impossibility emerged the great divinity or power that ancient tradition names as Ællead. The nature of Ællead is one of the great mysteries and no-one, not even the enigmatic Otherworlders or the acolytes of the elementae vitale, can truly know who or what it is, or what form the relationship between it and the Ananth takes, but suffice it to say that Ællead is the wellspring from which all else later emerged. Many cultures consider Ællead to be higher-deity, where others see it as the universe personified. Regardless of its nature, many ancient accounts (many unconnected and from wildly differing epochs of mortal history) claim that the birth spasms of Ællead churned the Ananth, resulting in the creation of the firmament above and the Penumbra below, with the Material appearing between them – the First Great Act of Shaping.
            For the first time in that timeless realm was there a sense of somatic mass – the material was a perfect marriage of the corporeal and incorporeal: the Penumbra and the Firmament, respectively. It was into this strange realm that appeared the first life, the Mesochthons. Born of Ællead's tears and emptiness, the Mesochthons were cursed beings. Created by a hollow entity that had no concept of the material realm or of life itself (being something existing outside the realm of life and time), the Mesochtons were creatures of despair, chaos and suffering, tortured by the emptiness that had gone into their creation. What serenity had once existed in the sterile solitude of the material realm was destroyed by the Mesochthon's presence. The Mesochthons largely wiped each other out during their tortured existence, and those that remained were imprisoned within the material by Ællead, who found their raw power too much to destroy.
            In their absence did Ællead envisage an existence of perfection, wholly different from the empty grey material that only echoed its own feelings. Finally a purpose was granted to the void, one of an ultimate perfection tempered by the long road ahead. To aid in the creation of this perfect realm Ællead granted life to what would become known as the Two-and-Twenty Demiurges – worker gods, imbued with a facet and fragment of its own emotion, each different from the other, though which together mirrored their creator – the Second great Act of Shaping.
            The Demiurges, charged with proliferating the material and propagating their and their 'father's' vision, set about crafting the material into something of beauty and purpose. The Æther was crafted, serving as a barrier from the Firmament and the Penumbra, and in this Æther were the first spheres of life created. Amongst them was the sphere of Elyden and its siblings, the planets and the star Sor at their centre. These spheres they shaped one-by-one, with some becoming the domains of a particular Demiurge, crafted in their personal image. Most however became objects for all the Demiurges to shape, each imparting a vestige of its own being within its making. Theologians describe the process of manipulating the matter of creation and its shaping by the Demiurges as a compulsion that the Two-and-Twenty had little choice over, and that every act of creation they undertook was wrought with pain – they were little more than automatons acting as proxies to Ællead. Elyden was given form by each of the Two-and-Twenty in this time, the Third great Act of Shaping.
              Ællead saw the work of the Demiurges and, pleased by the evolving shape of the material realm and its progression towards perfection, dreamt of life. It was in this age that Ællead sowed the seeds that would, upon the completion of the perfect realm, be granted a vestige of divinity and germinate into its perfect children – the immortal races. With that action – the Fourth great Act of Shaping – was the age of myth ended. Many scholars state that this dream of perfection was futile – a parable against the vainness of blind hope and expectation – and that the unravelling of that dream was already underway.

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This setting's looking promisingly awesome in it's dreadful, visceral glory. What kinds of roles do player characters assume in this fell world? What motivates their adventures?

Thanks! So far the world exists solely as background for my fiction/cartography, and I have an 'encyclopaedia' numbering just over 500,000 words (and steadily growing!). Were it designed for rp, PC's would be exploring the world, revealing strange ruins and decrepit denizens of the world and probably growing insane & corrupted in the process. Quite Cthulhu-Ian in practice

a bit more information about the world

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• Elyden is a rotten place, ancient and decaying beneath the languid dreams of the Demiurges. Seas, already barren and polluted from millennia of industry, are in retreat. Empires are in decline. Corruption is the rule - governments struggle to maintain order as resources run out across the globe. Strife and rebellion are commonplace. In other places coups have already toppled the governments and nations lie sundered, their lands prizes over which rogue patricians and magnates fight, their previous loyalties discarded. Small towns are either cut off from the heartlands of their once-nations or lie dead, populated by dregs and wretches struggling to survive. Corpses litter a land that is increasingly unravelling, the laws of nature dissolving even as the Demiurges' dreams grow more despairing and bitter. Millions are dead, their bodies a feast to carrion-beasts, their bodies leading the way to the few cities that remain: shallow mockeries of the civilised order that once was, these city-states stand as bastions against the grotesqueries that threaten to drag the world deeper into chaos. The hinterlands between cities are a festering wasteland where the dual forces known as the Firmament and the Penumbra hold sway, altering the landscape in unimaginable ways that rend once-sane minds into madness. degenerates and grotesques haunt these lands, and where a semblance of society exists it does so in morbid tribes and archaic sects that serve as black echoes to the fragments of normalcy that struggle to survive.
  
• The laws of nature are uravelling. It has been a long slow process of decay that has brought the world to its knees. Elyden was crafted through the toil of the once deific Demiurges, though they have long since fallen from grace. embittered by the lofty rank they once held, many have fallen into despair, the powers that once helped them create continents and oceans now polluting their dreams, warping the natural world. For it is they who are at the root of all that ails the world.
  
• Elyden is an ancient place, covered in ruins and dozens of strata of mortal life, going back to the first ages, perhaps a billion years past. the place is rife with ruins and the eerie cyclopean monuments built by and in dedication of the Demiurges. That these monolithic structures remain in any form at all after the passing of so many years is testament to the artifice of the Demiurges and their followers. elsewhere, continental shelves, once submerged beneath coastal waters lie exposed, little more than deserts of salt and dessicated corals. Ancient machinery lie fossilised, their secrets impossible to decipher. Once-proud metropolises stand, half broken and abandoned, their people either died (genocide, starvation, ritual sacrifice, war...) or left to join other settlements.
  
• Despair and grotesqueries. the people of this world have lived this way for generations, and in some areas this has gone on for dozens if not hundreds of years. entire areas once devoted to industry lie abandoned, the earth a scar of open-caste mines and quarries. lakes and inland seas are either dried up or polluted by bright-coloured chemicals. Everywhere the signs of the inevitable end are increasing - stillbirths, deformities, hydrocephaly, cyclocephaly, aepathy... the list goes on. The mortals of Elyden know their world is ending. Customs have changed and adapted to this. Some regions cling to a semblance of normalcy though in this world, they are the strange ones, living in a world of distorted traditions and broken dreams, ignoring the realities of the world. what were once deities are either forgotten or reviled as the cause for this decay. once-immaculate tenets and dogma are recycled, polluted by new apocryphal texts and used as propaganda by warlords and crusaders hoping to gain followers for their own causes. most hope is extinguished and where it remains it is distorted, as sickened as the world is grey. The Demiurges care not for the mortal's struggles and observe the world unthinking as they slowly decay to their own despair.
  
• the legacy of the ancient demiurges can be felt everywhere - from ancient monuments to the corruption prevalent in the world, it is their actions that shape all. Though now rotten an forgotten by most, they are still central to the fate of the world and some hope against all the evidence that if awakened and elevated to a position of power, their thoughts might yet be turned from grim darkness to rebirth. It is a fleeting hop, though and most who know of them despise them for their langour and ignorance of the mortal race's struggling. most demiurges are recognised as 'dead', their bodies monolithic and fossilised, blighting the mortal realm with their presence. Despite this infamy, many regions now recognise them under corrupted forms, and might worship them under archaic guises, giving substance to entities they might not fully understand - or care for - their plight.
  

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Is there any connection between the number or nature of the Two-and-Twenty Demiurges and the Major Arcana of a Tarot deck?

Yes there is, in a way, though very loosely. The Major arcana of Elyden's Tarokka decks correspond with the Demiurges, though many of them differ from the major arcana as we know them. Few people in the world would know the link between the demiurges and the cards though.

the most common guises of the Major arcana are:
The Deity   Rachanael
the Machinist   Nyarloth
the Hierophant   Allaishada
the Shadow   S'hith   
the Helix[b/]      Nelchael
the Dragon   Ashterath   
the Corpse   Talantehut   
the Heathen   Duruthilhotep
the Pawn      Vorropohaiah
the Slave      Malachai 
the Artisan       Synchthonith
the Doppelganger[b/]      Yaldabaoth
the Ascetic      Urakabarameel
the Traitor      Baphomet
the Beast         Arimaspi
the Ivory Moon      Neith
the Harlot      Sybaris
the Plague      Nergaal
the Flame      Avraham
the Blood Moon       Kharani
the Tree         Achaiah
the Itinerant      Shibboleth

Hi all, I'm a new member here so thought I'd post my world for critique (be kind, it's my first time sharing with a community of worldbuilders...).

Quote from: Quick InfoTitle:  the Dying World of Elyden
System: originally the world started out as a worldbuilding project for my fiction, though I've started cobbling together some rules based on the D&D 3.5 OGL, though with a focus on skills, no levels, and a completely redesigned spell system (that's also skill based)  
Theme: a world that's decaying following the death of its gods (whose regenerative influence is now gone, leading to corruption and natural laws unravelling)  
Tone: gritty, decaying empires, corruption, entropy, and possibly  jet black humour.
Inspirations:  Hieronymus Bosch, Jack Vance's Dying World (Elyden's decay isn't quite as far along as Vane's Dying Earth, though it's getting there), H. P. Lovecraft's Cthulhu Mythos (regarding the dead, and largely unknown and misunderstood gods [Demiurges]), George R. R. Martin's A Song of Fire and Ice series (mainly the politics, this is more or an inspiration than something I'm planning on emulating), body horror, vague steampunk themes (no cogs!).
Technology: at it's highest tech is early industrial revolution: so the main nations have printing presses, steam engines (though not trains), steam ships with steel hulls, heliographs (cameras). Of course, that doesn't mean that everywhere has the same technological base. Much like in the present day there are many indigenous cultures living largely pre-industrialised lives (and using classical architecture), Elyden is much the same. Many cultures exist in a pre-industrial state (either having lost their tech or never developed it in the first place). Many technologies date back to a golden age that has long-since been forgotten, and few are those who understand them.    
Magic:  in pre-industrialised societies magic exists in two forms – either the Atramenta or the firmament – which are analogous with generic magic, though the industrialised nations look down on such primitive mysticism, as they have advanced to a scientific understanding of the world, using magic as a resource – so in these advanced cultures magicians (called shapers) are generally equivalent to modern ay mechanics, engineers and machinists, overseeing the magical engines. Elsewhere, clone-bred magically-attuned individuals are bred for specific roles though they are considered tools at best even though they are technically sentient.  
Religion: worship of the demiurges waned millennia past, and that is why the demiurges are now dead. Mystery cults remain in regions, though they are growing more  popular as are apocalyptic cults. Generally, most religions ar corruptions of the original demiurge cults, though few know their own faith's roots.
Races:  humans dominate the world and common fantasy races (elves, goblins, dwarves etc.) are not to be found. Other races exist in their place, largely the 22 mortal races (one for each demiurge) of which humans are one and the most successful. Most are either extinct or corrupted from their own original forms.
Ecology: nature is waning, and many creatures are now extinct. What remains is either corrupted by the twisted nature of the world or bred into specific roles. Corruption and genetic defects are common, both in the wild and in urban societies. Conjoined twins, cyclocephaly, hydrocephaly, polydactylism, arachnodactylism, ostepetrosis, etc. are all very common.
Geography: the world is dominated by a supercontinent that is divided into three, all separated by shallow inner seas. Farther afield is the sole island continent of Bror, a distant land.

But a bit of history first. The world of Elyden has evolved, like many others I imagine, from a chain of different settings and worlds, the oldest created by myself for a D&D campaign that never took off. The idea for that campaign was a world-spanning city (anyone familiar with Magic: the Gathering might equate it to Ravnica, though my embryonic world predated it by some years), though the logistics and research required for such a (self-contained) world eventually put me off. I abandoned the world and started work on something else – an Egyptian themed setting called Khamid. I spent a long time on this setting, also designed as a D&D campaign world, though by the end I began to feel a bit constrained by the theme. I turned towards the rest of the world, a supercontinent called Sola, of which the Khamid setting was a small part and spent the next few years fleshing out that world...

Sola would eventually evolve into Elyden, though the latter would continue to evolve as my research continued to unearth interesting facts and tidbits from the real-world.

Elyden is a world plagued by the death of its 'gods', the so-called Two-and-Twenty Demiurges – worker deities created by a higher divinity to directly shaped the mortal realm and the planes beyond. They created the perfect world, though knowing nothing other than the act of crafting, continued to shape the world after perfection was attained. Long story short, this angered the higher divinity, who punished them, stripping them of their greater powers, where they became leaders to the 22 mortal tribes (each tribe initially comprised of 7-individuals, 3 male, 4 female, of different races  -each race personifying the traits of their primogenitor Demiurge). Most of the demiurges were embittered by this and many fell into despair and madness. Entropy, mutation, Hopelessness and desolation are all products of the demiurges' feelings.

This is ancient history, happening many ages past, and few are those now privy to such knowledge. Following their chastisement, the Demiurges' strength became directly influenced by the devotion of mortals, many of whom began to distance themselves from their creators. Some demiurges sank further into despair, using what remained of their powers to craft cyclopean edifices in a bid to increase their renown. Many such structures survive to this day, their monolithic size and incomprehensible symmetry baffling to contemporary men, many of whom grow insane, or whose bodies twist grotesquely at merely glimpsing such forgotten idols. Others instead became monomaniacal, using slave-armies to conquer the weak tribes and races, enforcing worship upon them. A few became ascetics, eschewing the vices that led to their fall in the first place, becoming solitary beings, weak near their siblings.

Slowly, as the mortals grew more powerful and distilled many of their creator's secrets, the demiurges' strength continued to wane, with only a handful amongst the Two-and-Twenty maintaining their iron-grasp of their mortal subjects. The others grew weak, their great bodies fossilising as they fell into a deep languor in which many now remain, their dreams and nightmares polluting the world, twisting the laws of nature.

Greatest amongst equals was the Demiurge Rachanael, who not only survived but amassed a great empire around the Inner Sea, though countless other nations and empires existed, most of them ignorant to the existence of the demiurges. But such things could not last and as the grotesque manifestations of the other demiurges continued to grow, Elyden began to die – once immutable laws of nature collapsing, her oceans drying up, the flora that carpeted her skin twisting into fell mockeries of what they had once been. The mortal body was no longer a vessel of perfection, becoming instead a crucible of decay and cankers.

This is the world of Elyden, where nations on the brink of collapse struggle despite the inevitable entropy that surrounds them.

[quick note: though I mention the demiurges a lot here, the setting itself isn't based around them and is pretty realistic. tech-base is roughly analogous with victorian england, though different regions may be better or, more likely, worse (prior to the fall of nations, when everything goes to shit), though i am developing the world at different points in history.

also, i've attached an image i'm currently working on (it's still heavily WIP and the attached map is very compressed - in fact the literally thousands of labels, of which only a small fraction are done, are barely visible as black smudges around the inner sea, in the northern half of the left hemisphere) of the world in its 'golden age' some years ago, before the collapse of civilisation was widely recognised.

Thanks for the warm welcome :)

@ light dragon: very true about that particular map. I'm actually not that pleased with it, probably since it was done for one of the monthly challenges and i got bogged down by some commissions and had to rush to finish it.

@ weave: I was thinking of compiling some of my notes to post up an overview thread to get some feedback (though I have about 500,000 words written about the world, mostly regional entries and paragraph=length bullet points on places, histories, organisations, religions etc) I've not really shared the world with many people so some feedback from fellow worldbuilders would be welcome