Quote from: Seraphine_HarmoniumAs for the feel, I suppose I think of the fae not operating quite the same way humans do. I want my denizens of the otherworld to be . . . well, otherworldly. Of course, there are plenty of examples of the otherworld being similar to the mortal world, so I would really say it's a criticism, just a matter of taste, and detail that I can't really explain.Ah. Fair enough. I may have made it subtler than I intended, but these beings don't quite have the degree of free will mortals claim--each one is defined by its bond in a way that will always restrict the choices they might make. I just didn't decide to tie those bonds into a monolithic court leadership. Instead, since each creature is guided by only a piece of the whole picture, they reach different conclusions than their fellows and so argue or act at cross-purposes.
If it feels any better to you, I should note that many fey, especially among the Seelie, are loyal to a fault when it comes to their queens and kings (the exception being the Unseelie), since a lord's bond generally encompasses all that the servant is and much more. They usually only scheme and clash against rivals below their liege's level.
And by the way, I would appreciate it if you could link folks to this work if you do decide to use any elements from it in your own setting! ;)