Rhime - Pathfinder Release

[LD]

Good luck working on further detailing the world.

Comments:
"However you
would not know over ten thousand beings call
this home from looking upon the town from afar."
Should be:

"However, from looking upon the town from afar, you would not know over ten thousand beings call this home."

Interesting that the entire city was constructed on the foundation of a giant's city.

Other than some other minor grammatical errors (that all posters' writing - mine especially included- suffer from time to time) the writeup seemed to succeed in giving a taste of what the city was about and it covered the important points.

Locan Thistle is interesting.

I know you do your own maps- but are the pictures also yours?

-
The 50-80% away hunting (Ogres) was a nice touch for the trading post.

"Resting on the pebbled beach of
Lake Vakar it is backdropped by stunning Glacier
locked mountains."

"Is backdropped" is not an proper English phrase.

Good Work.
-LD.

[Kaptn'Lath]

Sorry for being away for so long, time has been at a premium lately and I have made a better effort this summer to spend time out and about.

Thank you for reading Light Dragon, I am waiting for my wife to do a round of Proof Reading as I can't see the forest through the trees anymore.

I did not know "is backdropped" is not proper english untill you pointed it out thank you.

[Kaptn'Lath]

Well since my Bribes and Devilish Charm worked *winks at sparkletwist* and I somehow ended up upsetting Vreeg's Celtricia System I figured I should post everything that I have done related to Tu'loras including two pictures of the next areas of Tuloras I will be working on once Rhime is done. These are not final maps just pictures to help world build.

Super-Kama-Ha-Update!


File: _4chapter_four__history.pdf
File: _5chapter_five__mechanics.pdf
File: _6chapter_six__deities_and_churches.pdf
File: _7chapter_seven__alignments.pdf
File: _FT69498_rhime.pdf

[Kaptn'Lath]

Oops the Turtle ate my PDF. Lets try this again
File: _6chapter_six__deities_and_churches.pdf

[Elemental_Elf]

Bump - Update


File: 1249782459_729_FT69498_rhime.pdf

This version is much improved over the original, it's very cool!  

My only critique (which is probably a month too late) would be that the margin (between the columns) still feels a bit too tight, perhaps increase it by a smidgen. : )

[Kaptn'Lath]

This version is much improved over the original, it's very cool!  

My only critique (which is probably a month too late) would be that the margin (between the columns) still feels a bit too tight, perhaps increase it by a smidgen. : )

It's never too late for a good idea. I have widened the margin another increment which will show on the next update.

Thanks for reading!

[Llum]

The Dieties PDF is really non-intuitive because it has names (of the same diety?) all in the same row divided by columns, this should be changed to make it clearer.

[Kaptn'Lath]

Yea that is an old table, i just dusted it off so I could post it with the rest of the stuff, i am going to hit that chapter here quick and put in descriptions and flesh it out. It goes with the creation theory for the 26 major races of Tu'loras so I needed to throw it up here.

[Kaptn'Lath]

Necro!

Lets turn this into the Tu'loras Discussion Thread, as I now post all my stuff on the Wiki

http://www.thecbg.org/wiki/index.php?title=Discworld:MainPage

[Kaptn'Lath]

Woot! over 2000 hits already on the wiki, with that many hits anyone have any ideas of feed back? or prefered areas i focus on next>?