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LC's Poetry and Song Contest [Discussion Thread]

Started by Lmns Crn, January 09, 2009, 03:54:54 PM

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Kindling

Do words have to be involved, or can the piece be entirely instrumental?
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Ishmayl-Retired

That's a nice epic piece, Scholar. I would love to read more about him - do you have any non-song related material on Roland?
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Lmns Crn

Quote from: KindlingDo words have to be involved, or can the piece be entirely instrumental?
Quote from: LCSong lyrics are fine by themselves (melodies and other musical data aren't necessary).

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Any ancillary material (musical recordings, musical notation, artwork, et cetera) will not be considered and will not affect the contest's results.
Basically, do not submit a recording, and do not send musical notation. Those things are not eligible for judging. With this in mind, I think it would be rather difficult (though not necessarily impossible) to craft an effective wordless entry.

Of course, if you have great setting-related instrumental music, I (and others) would definitely like to hear it. It just doesn't fit the parameters of this contest.
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SilvercatMoonpaw

Can we submit an entry if we don't actually have a world written up for it but it's still in-world?  I have a short song I once came up with that I consider in-world, but not actually having a world written out anywhere.
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Lmns Crn

Quote from: SilvercatMoonpawCan we submit an entry if we don't actually have a world written up for it but it's still in-world?  I have a short song I once came up with that I consider in-world, but not actually having a world written out anywhere.
Go for it.
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Lmns Crn

I move quick: I'm gonna try my trick one last time--
you know it's possible to vaguely define my outline
when dust move in the sunshine

SilvercatMoonpaw

Okay, my entry "Come walk the Long, Long Road" is up.  I should note that I didn't write it as it would sound when sung because I don't know how to portray that in writing.  Also if it ever gets chosen there won't need to be a musical accompaniment, it's a solo voice piece.
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Lmns Crn

Quote from: SilvercatMoonpawI should note that I didn't write it as it would sound when sung because I don't know how to portray that in writing.
I saw it before your edit, actually, and I thought the way it was written got the point across pretty well.
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SilvercatMoonpaw

Quote from: Luminous CrayonI saw it before your edit, actually, and I thought the way it was written got the point across pretty well.
There were some others I didn't write that first time, such as each long being drawn out some.

I could try it again if you think it comes across.
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"No matter where you go, you will find stupid people."

Lmns Crn

I move quick: I'm gonna try my trick one last time--
you know it's possible to vaguely define my outline
when dust move in the sunshine

Kindling

Quote from: Luminous CrayonBasically, do not submit a recording, and do not send musical notation. Those things are not eligible for judging. With this in mind, I think it would be rather difficult (though not necessarily impossible) to craft an effective wordless entry.

Of course, if you have great setting-related instrumental music, I (and others) would definitely like to hear it. It just doesn't fit the parameters of this contest.

Oh. I misunderstood. I'm not in, then. Wah.
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SilvercatMoonpaw

Quote from: KindlingOh. I misunderstood. I'm not in, then. Wah.
You could always submit it to the "entries that didn't make it" thread.
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Polycarp

A jaunty tune of the Clockwork Jungle has been posted.  Only drawback is that it's got a lot of slang - but that's how shanties go.

[spoiler=In case you care]
The song is from khauta (hot air balloon) merchant fliers on the Black Circle, a trade route.

kite - A device used to steer a khauta, handled by a tack-master.
paint the black - To make a full circuit of the Black Circle route.  Fliers customarily paint their balloons with one black line or circle for each complete circuit they've made.
flash in a rainless sky - Lightning without any clouds or rain is often a clue that storm-wyrms, deadly aerial predators, are about.
Cat's Eye wall - The "Forest Walls" of the City of Orpiment (sometimes called "the Cat's Eye"), huge centuries-old constructions.
hoist up my bones - Dead Gheen are traditionally placed on a platform in the forest canopy where their flesh is eaten by aerial predators.
charter - A navigator (who reads the charts).
Wine-Blood Sea - The Sea of Netai; "wine-blood" is a fairly offensive slur referring to Umbril, who inhabit the Netai, and are seen as stereotypically unlikely to dance or to express much glee.
stones - "Stones" is short for "brimstones," slang referring to greenhorns on the route (because they stink, and their craft "drop like stones").
white cliffs - Huge clouds of steam formed by rainstorms over lava fields.
dip my tail - A sign of respect among Gheen.
Grey-thorn scale - "Scale" is a moderately offensive slur for an Iskite.  Greythorn is an Iskite city on the Black Circle.[/spoiler]
The Clockwork Jungle (wiki | thread)
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Lmns Crn

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you know it's possible to vaguely define my outline
when dust move in the sunshine

Matt Larkin (author)

Quote from: Luminous Crayon- Your submission must be new. Don't post something you've got laying around already. I want to put everybody on an even footing, without giving an advantage to people who already have tons of in-world poetry stashed on a hard drive or a website. Honor system, folks.
x. I was all about to submit my Echoes of Dreams opening before I re-read the contest rules.

Maybe I'll get around to doing something for Eschaton or Eclipse.

Another cool contest might be for people to write song lyrics for other's settings.
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