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Here is a revised setting handout; what do you think?

Started by Cheomesh, February 28, 2009, 12:12:37 PM

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Cheomesh

http://files.filefront.com/Of+the+Worldpdf/;13383634;/fileinfo.html

Revised my setting info, and put it on a single 8 page handout.

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Cheomesh

I am very fond of tea.

Ghostman

I took quick a look at it. Only read the introduction in the beginning, which I think does a good job sparking interest. The handout seems to be structured and laid out clearly enough, though I'd prefer a slightly greater difference between the two types of headlines. You could also add a glossary to the end so that a reader could quickly find the meaning of a term.
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Paragon * (Paragon Rules) * Savage Age (Wiki) * Argyrian Empire [spoiler=Mother 2]

* You meet the New Age Retro Hippie
* The New Age Retro Hippie lost his temper!
* The New Age Retro Hippie's offense went up by 1!
* Ness attacks!
SMAAAASH!!
* 87 HP of damage to the New Age Retro Hippie!
* The New Age Retro Hippie turned back to normal!
YOU WON!
* Ness gained 160 xp.
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