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A CBG Visual Novel

Started by SDragon, August 20, 2010, 08:55:49 PM

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SDragon

Quote from: Nomadic
Quote from: Rorschach FritosSteerpike shall be willowy. That is, associated with willows. Maybe for a background design, there could be a grove of willows near a cabbage patch? Possibly at night?

Make sure they are bare of all leaf and whisper strange things in the night. Perhaps they also bear a sap that makes anyone who drinks it see visions of distant realities dancing on the edge of oblivion.


"suddenly, Steerpike leaps at a tree, licking at the sap-sticky bark."

show Steerpike_licking_tree.png

Steerpike "*slurp*"
Steerpike "Yess...
Steerpike "*slurpslurp*"
Steerpike "The sap..."
Steerpike "*slurpslurpslurp*"
Steerpike "I can see..."
Steerpike "Distant realities...
Steerpike "*slurpslurp*"
Steerpike "Dancing..."
Steerpike "On the edge..."

"..."

Steerpike "OF OBLIVION!"

"..."
"..!"

Steerpike "*slurp*"

"Everyone slowly back away from him."
[spoiler=My Projects]
Xiluh
Fiendspawn
Opening The Dark SRD
Diceless Universal Game System (DUGS)
[/spoiler][spoiler=Merits I Have Earned]
divine power
last poster in the dragons den for over 24 hours award
Commandant-General of the Honor Guard in Service of Nonsensical Awards.
operating system
stealer of limetom's sanity
top of the tavern award


[/spoiler][spoiler=Books I Own]
D&D/d20:
PHB 3.5
DMG 3.5
MM 3.5
MM2
MM5
Ebberon Campaign Setting
Legends of the Samurai
Aztecs: Empire of the Dying Sun
Encyclopaedia Divine: Shamans
D20 Modern

GURPS:

GURPS Lite 3e

Other Systems:

Marvel Universe RPG
MURPG Guide to the X-Men
MURPG Guide to the Hulk and the Avengers
Battle-Scarred Veterans Go Hiking
Champions Worldwide

MISC:

Dungeon Master for Dummies
Dragon Magazine, issues #340, #341, and #343[/spoiler][spoiler=The Ninth Cabbage]  \@/
[/spoiler][spoiler=AKA]
SDragon1984
SDragon1984- the S is for Penguin
Ona'Envalya
Corn
Eggplant
Walrus
SpaceCowboy
Elfy
LizardKing
LK
Halfling Fritos
Rorschach Fritos
[/spoiler]

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Nomadic

Quote from: Rorschach Fritos
Quote from: Nomadic
Quote from: Rorschach FritosSteerpike shall be willowy. That is, associated with willows. Maybe for a background design, there could be a grove of willows near a cabbage patch? Possibly at night?

Make sure they are bare of all leaf and whisper strange things in the night. Perhaps they also bear a sap that makes anyone who drinks it see visions of distant realities dancing on the edge of oblivion.


"suddenly, Steerpike leaps at a tree, licking at the sap-sticky bark."

show Steerpike_licking_tree.png

Steerpike "*slurp*"
Steerpike "Yess...
Steerpike "*slurpslurp*"
Steerpike "The sap..."
Steerpike "*slurpslurpslurp*"
Steerpike "I can see..."
Steerpike "Distant realities...
Steerpike "*slurpslurp*"
Steerpike "Dancing..."
Steerpike "On the edge..."

"..."

Steerpike "OF OBLIVION!"

"..."
"..!"

Steerpike "*slurp*"

"Everyone slowly back away from him."

I can see that this will end well

Superfluous Crow

Hmm, can't really help but notice that you missed my post...
Currently...
Writing: Broken Verge v. 207
Reading: the Black Sea: a History by Charles King
Watching: Farscape and Arrested Development

SDragon

Quote from: Conundrum CrowHmm, can't really help but notice that you missed my post...

Sorry about that.

Visual Novels, as the name suggests, tend to be very story-oriented, so they don't really have levels, per se, so much as they have scenes. While it might be cool to have it in a different project, I'm not entirely sure how much we can jump around from setting to setting. That said, if someone has an idea on how we might be able to do that, please feel free to let me know.

Also, I'll add you to the list of characters. Turtles, of course, are a must.
[spoiler=My Projects]
Xiluh
Fiendspawn
Opening The Dark SRD
Diceless Universal Game System (DUGS)
[/spoiler][spoiler=Merits I Have Earned]
divine power
last poster in the dragons den for over 24 hours award
Commandant-General of the Honor Guard in Service of Nonsensical Awards.
operating system
stealer of limetom's sanity
top of the tavern award


[/spoiler][spoiler=Books I Own]
D&D/d20:
PHB 3.5
DMG 3.5
MM 3.5
MM2
MM5
Ebberon Campaign Setting
Legends of the Samurai
Aztecs: Empire of the Dying Sun
Encyclopaedia Divine: Shamans
D20 Modern

GURPS:

GURPS Lite 3e

Other Systems:

Marvel Universe RPG
MURPG Guide to the X-Men
MURPG Guide to the Hulk and the Avengers
Battle-Scarred Veterans Go Hiking
Champions Worldwide

MISC:

Dungeon Master for Dummies
Dragon Magazine, issues #340, #341, and #343[/spoiler][spoiler=The Ninth Cabbage]  \@/
[/spoiler][spoiler=AKA]
SDragon1984
SDragon1984- the S is for Penguin
Ona'Envalya
Corn
Eggplant
Walrus
SpaceCowboy
Elfy
LizardKing
LK
Halfling Fritos
Rorschach Fritos
[/spoiler]

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sparkletwist

QuoteI'm not entirely sure how much we can jump around from setting to setting... Turtles, of course, are a must.
Obviously, they are interdimensional warp turtles. Hop on one's back and it will take you across space and time faster than... well, faster than you'd expect from a turtle, that's for sure.

SDragon

Quote from: sparkletwist
QuoteI'm not entirely sure how much we can jump around from setting to setting... Turtles, of course, are a must.

That... might work. Maybe the characters are searching for something? Maybe we could have some mystery for the plot?
[spoiler=My Projects]
Xiluh
Fiendspawn
Opening The Dark SRD
Diceless Universal Game System (DUGS)
[/spoiler][spoiler=Merits I Have Earned]
divine power
last poster in the dragons den for over 24 hours award
Commandant-General of the Honor Guard in Service of Nonsensical Awards.
operating system
stealer of limetom's sanity
top of the tavern award


[/spoiler][spoiler=Books I Own]
D&D/d20:
PHB 3.5
DMG 3.5
MM 3.5
MM2
MM5
Ebberon Campaign Setting
Legends of the Samurai
Aztecs: Empire of the Dying Sun
Encyclopaedia Divine: Shamans
D20 Modern

GURPS:

GURPS Lite 3e

Other Systems:

Marvel Universe RPG
MURPG Guide to the X-Men
MURPG Guide to the Hulk and the Avengers
Battle-Scarred Veterans Go Hiking
Champions Worldwide

MISC:

Dungeon Master for Dummies
Dragon Magazine, issues #340, #341, and #343[/spoiler][spoiler=The Ninth Cabbage]  \@/
[/spoiler][spoiler=AKA]
SDragon1984
SDragon1984- the S is for Penguin
Ona'Envalya
Corn
Eggplant
Walrus
SpaceCowboy
Elfy
LizardKing
LK
Halfling Fritos
Rorschach Fritos
[/spoiler]

Before you accept advice from this post, remember that the poster has 0 ranks in knowledge (the hell I'm talking about)

Nomadic

Quote from: NomadicOk so they have to collect the nine holy cabbages to unlock a power great enough to stop the spambots forever. The ninth cabbage though requires them to fight the great fiend of the ninth cabbage who seeks to spread the spam.

They ride their warp turtle in search of the holy cabbages.

Superfluous Crow

The Knights of the Round Turtle?
Currently...
Writing: Broken Verge v. 207
Reading: the Black Sea: a History by Charles King
Watching: Farscape and Arrested Development

Nomadic

Quote from: Conundrum CrowThe Knights of the Round Turtle?

Nonsense it's obviously a box turtle.

SDragon

Knights of the round box turtle?
[spoiler=My Projects]
Xiluh
Fiendspawn
Opening The Dark SRD
Diceless Universal Game System (DUGS)
[/spoiler][spoiler=Merits I Have Earned]
divine power
last poster in the dragons den for over 24 hours award
Commandant-General of the Honor Guard in Service of Nonsensical Awards.
operating system
stealer of limetom's sanity
top of the tavern award


[/spoiler][spoiler=Books I Own]
D&D/d20:
PHB 3.5
DMG 3.5
MM 3.5
MM2
MM5
Ebberon Campaign Setting
Legends of the Samurai
Aztecs: Empire of the Dying Sun
Encyclopaedia Divine: Shamans
D20 Modern

GURPS:

GURPS Lite 3e

Other Systems:

Marvel Universe RPG
MURPG Guide to the X-Men
MURPG Guide to the Hulk and the Avengers
Battle-Scarred Veterans Go Hiking
Champions Worldwide

MISC:

Dungeon Master for Dummies
Dragon Magazine, issues #340, #341, and #343[/spoiler][spoiler=The Ninth Cabbage]  \@/
[/spoiler][spoiler=AKA]
SDragon1984
SDragon1984- the S is for Penguin
Ona'Envalya
Corn
Eggplant
Walrus
SpaceCowboy
Elfy
LizardKing
LK
Halfling Fritos
Rorschach Fritos
[/spoiler]

Before you accept advice from this post, remember that the poster has 0 ranks in knowledge (the hell I'm talking about)

SDragon

Due to recent news, Ishmayl will be in this game.  At this point, I can't say whether he'll be a cameo or a full-fledged protagonist, but I'm not going to leave him out of the game.


Edit-- Also, I got my black Copic marker refilled today, and I picked up two new ones. Hopefully I can get some of the artwork started.
[spoiler=My Projects]
Xiluh
Fiendspawn
Opening The Dark SRD
Diceless Universal Game System (DUGS)
[/spoiler][spoiler=Merits I Have Earned]
divine power
last poster in the dragons den for over 24 hours award
Commandant-General of the Honor Guard in Service of Nonsensical Awards.
operating system
stealer of limetom's sanity
top of the tavern award


[/spoiler][spoiler=Books I Own]
D&D/d20:
PHB 3.5
DMG 3.5
MM 3.5
MM2
MM5
Ebberon Campaign Setting
Legends of the Samurai
Aztecs: Empire of the Dying Sun
Encyclopaedia Divine: Shamans
D20 Modern

GURPS:

GURPS Lite 3e

Other Systems:

Marvel Universe RPG
MURPG Guide to the X-Men
MURPG Guide to the Hulk and the Avengers
Battle-Scarred Veterans Go Hiking
Champions Worldwide

MISC:

Dungeon Master for Dummies
Dragon Magazine, issues #340, #341, and #343[/spoiler][spoiler=The Ninth Cabbage]  \@/
[/spoiler][spoiler=AKA]
SDragon1984
SDragon1984- the S is for Penguin
Ona'Envalya
Corn
Eggplant
Walrus
SpaceCowboy
Elfy
LizardKing
LK
Halfling Fritos
Rorschach Fritos
[/spoiler]

Before you accept advice from this post, remember that the poster has 0 ranks in knowledge (the hell I'm talking about)

Nomadic

Quote from: Rorschach FritosDue to recent news, Ishmayl will be in this game.  At this point, I can't say whether he'll be a cameo or a full-fledged protagonist, but I'm not going to leave him out of the game.


Edit-- Also, I got my black Copic marker refilled today, and I picked up two new ones. Hopefully I can get some of the artwork started.

Can't wait to see it :)

SDragon

A bit more detail on Brainface's character design:

(8:45:41 PM) Me: you've been suggested as a character, if you want in
(8:46:23 PM) brainface: sure, sounds interesting, as long as you don't write me murdering kittens or something
(8:46:42 PM) Me: I think Steerpike volunteered for that role
(8:46:54 PM) brainface: sweet, as long as it's covered
(8:47:51 PM) Me: Horse/Troll has suggested that your character be a brain in a jar, with all sorts of high-tech hookups to computers and such
(8:48:50 PM) brainface: ridiculous tech attachments. like, a scanner, computer, normal stuff like that, and on the side a blender & microwave
(8:49:29 PM) brainface: otherwise i don't think it would be true to my character
(8:49:40 PM) Me: that sounds perfect
[spoiler=My Projects]
Xiluh
Fiendspawn
Opening The Dark SRD
Diceless Universal Game System (DUGS)
[/spoiler][spoiler=Merits I Have Earned]
divine power
last poster in the dragons den for over 24 hours award
Commandant-General of the Honor Guard in Service of Nonsensical Awards.
operating system
stealer of limetom's sanity
top of the tavern award


[/spoiler][spoiler=Books I Own]
D&D/d20:
PHB 3.5
DMG 3.5
MM 3.5
MM2
MM5
Ebberon Campaign Setting
Legends of the Samurai
Aztecs: Empire of the Dying Sun
Encyclopaedia Divine: Shamans
D20 Modern

GURPS:

GURPS Lite 3e

Other Systems:

Marvel Universe RPG
MURPG Guide to the X-Men
MURPG Guide to the Hulk and the Avengers
Battle-Scarred Veterans Go Hiking
Champions Worldwide

MISC:

Dungeon Master for Dummies
Dragon Magazine, issues #340, #341, and #343[/spoiler][spoiler=The Ninth Cabbage]  \@/
[/spoiler][spoiler=AKA]
SDragon1984
SDragon1984- the S is for Penguin
Ona'Envalya
Corn
Eggplant
Walrus
SpaceCowboy
Elfy
LizardKing
LK
Halfling Fritos
Rorschach Fritos
[/spoiler]

Before you accept advice from this post, remember that the poster has 0 ranks in knowledge (the hell I'm talking about)

Nomadic

Quote from: Rorschach FritosA bit more detail on Brainface's character design:

(8:45:41 PM) Me: you've been suggested as a character, if you want in
(8:46:23 PM) brainface: sure, sounds interesting, as long as you don't write me murdering kittens or something
(8:46:42 PM) Me: I think Steerpike volunteered for that role
(8:46:54 PM) brainface: sweet, as long as it's covered
(8:47:51 PM) Me: Horse/Troll has suggested that your character be a brain in a jar, with all sorts of high-tech hookups to computers and such
(8:48:50 PM) brainface: ridiculous tech attachments. like, a scanner, computer, normal stuff like that, and on the side a blender & microwave
(8:49:29 PM) brainface: otherwise i don't think it would be true to my character
(8:49:40 PM) Me: that sounds perfect

I won't lie... I laughed...

SDragon

I've started the artwork for Brainface, but unfortunately, I don't have a scanner. I'll try to see what I can do about remedying that, though.
[spoiler=My Projects]
Xiluh
Fiendspawn
Opening The Dark SRD
Diceless Universal Game System (DUGS)
[/spoiler][spoiler=Merits I Have Earned]
divine power
last poster in the dragons den for over 24 hours award
Commandant-General of the Honor Guard in Service of Nonsensical Awards.
operating system
stealer of limetom's sanity
top of the tavern award


[/spoiler][spoiler=Books I Own]
D&D/d20:
PHB 3.5
DMG 3.5
MM 3.5
MM2
MM5
Ebberon Campaign Setting
Legends of the Samurai
Aztecs: Empire of the Dying Sun
Encyclopaedia Divine: Shamans
D20 Modern

GURPS:

GURPS Lite 3e

Other Systems:

Marvel Universe RPG
MURPG Guide to the X-Men
MURPG Guide to the Hulk and the Avengers
Battle-Scarred Veterans Go Hiking
Champions Worldwide

MISC:

Dungeon Master for Dummies
Dragon Magazine, issues #340, #341, and #343[/spoiler][spoiler=The Ninth Cabbage]  \@/
[/spoiler][spoiler=AKA]
SDragon1984
SDragon1984- the S is for Penguin
Ona'Envalya
Corn
Eggplant
Walrus
SpaceCowboy
Elfy
LizardKing
LK
Halfling Fritos
Rorschach Fritos
[/spoiler]

Before you accept advice from this post, remember that the poster has 0 ranks in knowledge (the hell I'm talking about)