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Character Name: Achiliene "Death Dancer" Odieon
Player Name: Benicus
Class: Scout-7/Dervish-10
Total ECL: 17
HP: 116 (7d8+10d10+34)
AC:34 [+9 Armor +9 Dex +3 Item +3 Dervish] (+1 Dodge would make it AC 35 against one target)
Initiative: +12 [+9 Dex +3 Class Features]
Speed: 55 Feet (30 Base, 25 Class Features)
Signature: Dancing Death Blades (Dervish Dance+Skirmish Damage)

Race: Human
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Deity: None, hates the gods
Size: Medium
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Height: 6'
Weight: 200lbs.
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Red
Skin: White

Abilities:
Strength: 12 (+1)
Dexterity: 28 [+6 Gloves, 22 normal, 18 buy+4 stat increases] (+9)
Constitution: 14 (+2)
Intelligence: 14 (+2)
Wisdom: 8 (-1)
Charisma: 8 (-1)

Saving Throws:
Fort: 9 [+5 Base +2 Ability +1 Battle Fortitude +1 Item]
Ref: 22 [+12 Base +9 Ability +1 Item]
Will: 9 [+9 Base -1 Abilty +1 Item]

BAB: +15/+10/+5

Spell Resistance: 0

Grapple: +16 [+15 BAB +1 Str]

Attacks:
+4 Merciful Keen Scimitar +29/+25/+19 [+1 Weapon Focus, +4 Magical, +9 Dex, +15/+10/+5 Base] (1d6+1d6+5{if Dervish Dancing}+1 Str+4 Magic Nonlethal Damage, 16-20X2 Crit {+4 on Confirm Crit attempts})

+1 Shortbow with 20 Arrows +25/+20/+15 [+1 Magic, +9 Dex, +15/+10/+5 Base]

Feats:
Combat Expertise
Dodge
Mobility
Weapon Focus (Scimitar)
Spring Attack
Weapon Finesse
Elusive Target
Improved Disarm
Power Critical (Scimitar)

SA:
2 Bonus Feats
Dervish Dance 5/day Lasting 10 rounds each
A thousand cuts 1/day
Tireless Dance
Elaborate Parry
Dance of Death
Improved Reaction
Movement Mastery
Slashing Blades
Skirimish (+2d6 on all attacks made when moved 10ft. and +2AC)
Flawless Stride
Evasion
Trackless Step
Uncanny Dodge
Battle Fortitude +1
Trapfinding

Languages:
Common
Dwarven
Elven

Gear:
+4 Merciful Keen Scimitar
Shortbow w/ 20 arrows
+5 Mithral Chain
Gloves of Dexterity +6
Cloak of Resistance +1
Potion of Cure Moderate Wounds
Potions of Cure Light WoundsX4
100,000 GP in Reserve

Skills(191 Points, *=Class Skill):
*Balance (20 Ranks)
Bluff (10 Ranks)
*Climb(20 Ranks)
*Escape Artist (20 Ranks)
*Hide (11 Ranks)
*Perform Weapon Drill (20 Ranks)
*Perform Dance (20 Ranks)
*Sense Motive (20 Ranks)
*Tumble (20 Ranks)
*Swim (20 Ranks)

We're world builders, not twinkers. I think you'd get a more informed response here: http://community.wizards.com/forumdisplay.php?f=339

You are looking for optimizing/min-maxing your character, right?

Well yeah, but I also wanted to see if anyone liked/hated the concept I have here.

What "concept"? I see a bunch of numbers.

Where's the personality? The backstory? The goals, the desires, the aspirations?

I'd love to comment and help you revise the character, but without an inkling of the context, I'm lost.

With all the god-hate, why not ur-priest levels?

Meh. A good build is often the foundation of character and personality. This character happens to have ADD. Also note that he/she/it is on eight kinds of speed. Also note that IMHO this should be a xeph.