The Campaign Builder's Guild

Since MadApe posted here, I guess its OK to do so...

Interesting choice for the genesis of your world. I also have a primeval and deadly forest world rolling around in my head, but I took a different route. My world took to the canopy while yours burrowed under the earth.

I'm interested why you chose minotaurs to remain on the surface above...especially in the canopy.

What about food production? In the Kyen section you mention Darkleaf plants, and I believe its said in passing in the Jisshith section, have these spread throughout the depths?

Perhaps in your cities section you could add information about allied and enemy cities?

I'll think of more as I read more.

While Darkleaf plants are pretty common, most grain production among the 13 cities takes place in Kyen.  Most of the other cities have grain listed as a import, you'll note.

The allies and enemies thing is a good idea.